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A request. He wanted his blade and soul char with a smug burping face, couldn't draw a burp, so enjoy smug.
Another one done while waiting between matches
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Posted by nnn4463 6 years ago Report
smug is good
Posted by hibbyjibby 6 years ago Report
Inb4 pointless comment. You know the one I mean.
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Anyway, she looks alright. I think her midsection is a bit long/tall though, and her head proportions are a little strange, like her forehead is too large and her facial features should be a little bit higher up the face.
Perspective is a little over the place too, the stomach seems to be facing its side to us, even though anon's B&S character is facing a different angle. I believe the stomach could've used a bit more definition to avoid that, as well as near the leg. The stomach looks like it's attached to between the legs. Speaking of the legs, where her shins should be looks like it's too squished or small for them to be there. The tail was clever to use to hide it, but it gives me this sorta illusion.
Either way, even with the criticisms of this piece, it's still enjoyable even if I feel it needs some serious adjustments. /d/, what a place for ideas and lurking, eh?
Posted by Paisho 6 years ago Report
Thank you, again it's much appreciated. I agree, I'm still working on proportions and anatomy, so I'm just trying different poses and such.
The belly needs more bulges and details, yeah. But it was 2am and I wanted to go to bed.
The character in question is from a race which is obviously very loli/shota, and I tried to portray this by giving her a larger forehead than normal,which is commonly done to make characters seem younger. I probably goofed up tho
Posted by hibbyjibby 6 years ago Report
I figured you were still probably trying out some things, which I always respect and put much greater priority/emphasis onto. It's better to try new stuff and not quite succeed, as opposed to doing the usual and being repetitive.
Fair enough on the stomach, won't hold that against you. But it definitely lends evidence to maybe prepping a bit more for a picture, like setting time aside specifically for art. Doing it inbetween Rainbow 6 games would definitely be limiting.
And ahh, I think I know which race. I tried B&S, I remember those minuscule animal-ish people. I can see the intent now that you presented your reason, and while it could use a little refining, it makes sense. There were other details you could've used too, like bigger eyes for example. All in all, you make some fair points.
Posted by Diversity23 6 years ago Report
I can spend some time with you and your belly, if you want ^^