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Finally I managed to get around to completing this next chapter. It certainly wasn't easy given how much goes on in it and how close we're coming to the end.
Anyhow in this chapter both Jaune and Cardin find themselves in situations they did not hope for and Reese has a revelation.
Hope you all Enjoy
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Posted by MoonColva90 6 years ago Report
Um, im noticing a continuity error. You typed the Centaur had eaten the most, 8. But you also typed that the Lamia ate 6 more people, and moved her first 2 to her snake stomach. So technically, they are tied.
Posted by Davyjones 6 years ago Report
Whoops that is an error on my part, I meant to say she had eaten 6 in total
Posted by MoonColva90 6 years ago Report
Eh, gappy to help.
Posted by MoonColva90 6 years ago Report
Happy
Posted by MoonColva90 6 years ago Report
Man those girls were a little shortsighted with their plan.
Posted by Davyjones 6 years ago Report
Aye but they are strangers to a city
Posted by MoonColva90 6 years ago Report
Um, as 'hunters' they should know that eating several people in one location (or in this case luring several people who DROVE there) brings attention, regardless of the territory they're in (and im just continuing this discussion/arguement for the lols)