On the beginning of what looks like a date, Lucia’s boyfriend Ethan proposes to finally indulge in her greatest fantasy; having a boyfriend eat her oldest sister Rose. Though Ethan proposes that Lucia eat some people herself just so the two have more bliss in what will follow afterwards prompting Lucia to leave and get right on it. Now alone in the Lillis House, Ethan enacts the real plan he has though an unforeseen bump sets it all awry.

I tried a new approach to writing with this piece, mostly in an attempt to see if it will help me get stories out faster. And while it did do just that, I felt something was amiss with it after giving it one or two look overs. Thankfully,  VividLucidity was willing to look it over and give me a list of critiques to help improve it. So a special thanks to them for taking the time to help make this little experiment turn out better than I originally hoped.

And as a small side-note, for those keeping track, the only Lillis Sister left to star in a story of her own is Crystal.

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