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Mai's First Time By number12321 -- Report

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So a few things for this one.

This was a commission for Jimjohn101:
(He's a cool guy check out his stuff!)

I had a great time brainstorming a new character with him and loved letting that character turn Keegan into a pile of poo.

The visual aspects of the character are based off of the girl on the thumbnail, Shiori Tsukada.

I have been starting to recently like writing stories based on non vore images, while my abilities to draw will be pretty low for a bit I still like giving a visual idea of the character. I plan to use this method of thumbnail with a story notice (I don't want to clickbait anyone).

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Posted by Gelus 4 years ago Report

Gender tags, please, it's super important for people who like content to be able to find it and people who don't like content to be able to avoid it.


Posted by number12321 4 years ago Report

Whoops! My bad, thank you for the reminder.


Posted by Gelus 4 years ago Report

No worries, it popped up and I saw they weren't there and figured you might want to get your optimal favorites and comments since you went to the effort to write a story.


Posted by GilPix 3 years ago Report

Hey! This was pretty good! I like that the Friendship details were included.
Something about pre knowledge of victim makes it more hot


Posted by number12321 3 years ago Report

Thank you very much, I'm glad to hear you liked it.