This is one of the projects that I've been working on, just for my own amusement. I wanted to see how making a story completely composed of dialogue went. Personally I think it turned out fine, though I definitely wouldn't make this my primary writing style.

Something I've noticed in my other stories is that I have a hard time balancing talking with straight narration. Sometimes people's speech feels oddly spaced out by 3rd-person exposition, other times a conversation can dominate a whole scene, with little more than the occasional indicator that someone different is talking to break things up. I don't think there's really a fix, or even a right answer for this; it's just a thing I noticed and am interested in discussing, if anyone feels like it.

Hope you liked the story; there is more to come, and I've resumed working on my commission list
Cheers!

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