This chapter gave me a lot of trouble back when I was first writing the story. I stopped working on it for a while because I wasn't satisfied with the direction it was moving in, and I wasn't sure I'd be able to salvage Ari's character by this point (I was starting to just hate him.) Still, I was able to hammer out a version of this chapter which I don't despise. It's still quite lewd but it was originally much worse, and at least now I can say it's definitely moving the plot along more than anything else.

More of Steph and Kari soon, so don't worry bout that.

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