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Keeping Dipper Close By TheDragonBoy -- Report

Dipper just accepted Ford's offer to become his apprentice and stay in Gravity Falls... without his sister. Mabel is, of course, very upset about this. So upset that she might be driven to do things she wouldn't normally do...

An oral vore story where Mabel uses some unconventional methods to keep her brother very "close". After writing a number of unbirth stories with the Pines twins, I really wanted to write a straight-up oral vore story. Even so, there is an alternate version of this story that follows from my previous two unbirth stories and continues with that theme, you can check it out here:
"When Size Matters": https://aryion.com/g4/view/477321

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Posted by TheDragonBoy 6 years ago Report

Yeah, I can see that. I wanted it to seem like she intended to let him out, cause I feel that would be more inline with the characters, but at the same time I wanted there to be that hint of “we’ll maybe she’ll actually just give in and change her mind?” It didn’t feel right for me at the time to make it much more explicit than that.
Glad you still liked it though. Which type of ending would you have preferred?