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Suika is one of my favorite 2hus, so I had to make a story for her. I think I did this one a little better than my first...
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Finished on September 6 2018

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pzu

Posted by pzu 1 year ago Report

Truth be told I think his story is better than mine > w>

Pickyfanboy

Posted by Pickyfanboy 1 year ago Report

But I prefer the outcome of yours

ItsSongxing

Posted by ItsSongxing 1 year ago Report

Bruh.

Pickyfanboy

Posted by Pickyfanboy 1 year ago Report

What? I'm complementing this story via comparison

pzu

Posted by pzu 1 year ago Report

It's ok! Please refrain from comparing my stuff to other's work though- we're different people, so we're gonna have different tastes! (^_−)☆

Pickyfanboy

Posted by Pickyfanboy 1 year ago Report

Ok, fine.

ItsSongxing

Posted by ItsSongxing 1 year ago Report

That, and the fact that it was not just any old comparison, but a comparison that intentionally derides a 3rd party's work simply because they didn't write the pred/prey roles you like. You gotta stop, dude. I won't be making another comment after this lest we completely swarm pzu here, but I'll say this much:

You told me back on my Miko story that this became a sort of in-joke that you took too far. When even you admit that you took something too far, that's a point where you have to stop taking it anywhere. Keep it an in-joke. It's not cute, nor endearing, nor funny. It's just pissing off creators that're making the content they like; not only that, but you're shit-talking people on other peoples' comment sections. That's no good, unless your goal is to be an arse.

Pickyfanboy

Posted by Pickyfanboy 1 year ago Report

I did say in the last comment that I'd stop didn't I? I get it, Prior to joining this site, most of the people whose work I commented on were close friends, so stuff like this wasn't taken so seriously. That combined with my short temper doesn't make for a good combination. I really just need to learn when to just not say anything. Please be patient.

Reaverbot

Posted by Reaverbot 1 year ago Report

For what it's worth, I thought your comment was funny. Like, and I'm just being honest, I couldn't possibly care how you thought that story should have ended, especially because it was written for someone else, but I didn't take offense or anything.

Just keep on being you brah. It's not hurting anyone

Pickyfanboy

Posted by Pickyfanboy 1 year ago Report

Finally. I actually intended for that to be a joke

Reaverbot

Posted by Reaverbot 1 year ago Report

Once again, I really like the disposal. Reimu being resigned to her fate was weirdly cute, and you captured Suika being a jerk about it pretty adorably.

I guess if I had to give an overall criticism it's that you're a bit scant on detail in a lot of spots. Stuff goes from A to B to C really quickly and it makes it hard to take it in, I guess? That can be a difficult aspect of fet writing, especially if it's sections you don't much care for compared to those you like. Either way, that was fun, and you're writing exactly the kind of content I enjoy. I look forward to more stuff!

pzu

Posted by pzu 1 year ago Report

Thanks! I think so too. I think I gotta figure it out a little more. d(>_・ )

Mortaven

Posted by Mortaven 11 months ago Report

-w- Niiice, really like how ya portrayed Suika, one of my favorites, and I never get to see her as a pred >w> Or in vore that goes this far.

pzu

Posted by pzu 11 months ago Report

Suika is my favorite touhou! She works so well as a pred with her growing stuff. Also her playful attitude makes it really fun to write.

Mortaven

Posted by Mortaven 11 months ago Report

ezactly! -w- lil (GIANT) playful drunk loli...ehehehe.