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A follow up to my first story of the same title. I feel my writing is improving, slowly.
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Finished September 10 2018
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Posted by Cobbly 6 years ago Report
Nice. I wish you had done a bit more with the sentient fat thing.
Posted by Nyusha 6 years ago Report
I should’ve, sentient fat is good stuff. I think I’m gonna try it more in the future though, so don’t worry
Posted by lolomine 6 years ago Report
Your work has very good that victims die horrible death! While I read, I erected.
The development that all the members circle drinks a flagship and the search fleet which did it, and the Re-class which I digest Zuihou-chan and become her figure, and became able to change does an older sister of Zuihou-chan and changes into feces looks good.
Posted by Nyusha 6 years ago Report
Poor Zuihou can’t catch a break