Posted by Kelly 6 years ago Report

Hehe x3

Posted by HMDVore 6 years ago Report

Could you do a story like this with fatal digestion?

Posted by nafarious 6 years ago Report

This story actually had digestion originally, but I didn't think it had turned out so well, so it got changed up a bit. I might come back to this story and make a different ending with digestion, not sure when that might happen though.

Posted by Kelly 6 years ago Report

Would love to see that too

Posted by theheadsn 6 years ago Report

really liked it, was expecting them to actually get digested lol

Posted by Deviant167niner 6 years ago Report

Lots of duplicate and unnecessary adjectives but other than that it’s great! Wish they woke up and did some struggling

Posted by rugli 6 years ago Report

WOW, that was hot...but are you sure you don't want make follow up to this one I might have an idea or two if you are intrested. :)

Posted by nafarious 6 years ago Report

pm me if you have an idea

Posted by Anonymouslion 5 years ago Report

I would love to see a part two of Anna getting eaten. However I would prefer her to be somewhat conscious, and maybe have Kelly play with her food a little, make her squirm and giggle a bit, as I imagine that Kelly’s tongue PROBABLY tickled, at least a little ;)

Posted by Anonymouslion 5 years ago Report

And the antacids still used

Posted by dubblebubble 3 years ago Report

I'm typically a fan of fatal digestion in these stories but you know what? I think I like this story BECAUSE it's non-fatal, and not in spite of it! I think the particular way it was done, having them be unconscious the entire time, having the daughter be basically on a tantalizing display, etc. I think they all worked really well!