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Uh oh, doesn't look like this is what Rarity was expecting when she received the royal summons!
Oh well, at least she knows there's no point in trying to resist
Posted by empatheticapathy 6 years ago Report
Surprised Rarity has nothing to say. She's usually very talkative.
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Posted by Slimshod 6 years ago Report
Love a good build up
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Posted by whitpey 6 years ago Report
I like the build up though I think you're missing a word in the last text bubble for the first part of the pic. I believe there is supposed to be a "Bel in front of churned. Just some feedback to help improve.
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Posted by Shadowhare 6 years ago Report
I don't think so. The "be" is placed a few words prior. "..where you'll BE slowly, mercilessly churned..."
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Posted by hunnter 6 years ago Report
Yes shadowhare is correct. But maybe it could have been clearer :P
Maybe I should have put ellipses around the words so it was more obvious it's a single sentence
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Posted by whitpey 6 years ago Report
Oh my bad I didn't see the be at the beginning.
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Posted by VoraciousSincerity 6 years ago Report
Glad to see your back on the scene, I look forward to more of this and your other work! Also, awesome to see some good fatal Celestia vore, Luna shouldn't be the only one who feasts!
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