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The Grimm aren't sufficient in holding off the students in the Colosseum. Cinder has other plans.
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Hi all! This is my first story here, hopefully many more to come.
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Posted by FireRed2 6 years ago Report
Interesting story.
Posted by CloudNine 6 years ago Report
Thanks!
Posted by nnn4463 6 years ago Report
Couple mistakes here amd there, and not fond of reese being orey
But a good first story for sure, keep it up
Posted by CloudNine 6 years ago Report
Thank you!
Posted by nnn4463 6 years ago Report
No problem, look forward to seeing what future stories you write
Hopefully some more rwby
Posted by CloudNine 6 years ago Report
There will be. I plan to write a Part 2 to this involving Neo.
Posted by nnn4463 6 years ago Report
Excellent
Posted by Larkspurdiblock 6 years ago Report
Interesting, interesting.
Honestly, would be neat to see something like Neo and Yang ending up as the predatory minions of Cinder.
Posted by smiley 6 years ago Report
Nice work, I like your description of Cinder swallowing people :3
Posted by CloudNine 6 years ago Report
Thanks! The swallowing process is my favorite!
Posted by smiley 6 years ago Report
Swallowing is the best ^^