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Tags: Belch Belly Belly ache Belly bulge Bulge Burp F/F f/multiple Female Pred Female Prey Hammerspace Belly Imp Imp Girl Macro/Micro Magic Mass Vore Multiple Preys Saliva shrink Shrinking Shrinking Prey Size difference stomach ache Stomach Noises Stomach pain Struggling Struggling prey Taste tasting teasing teasing prey
Late one night, Mahogany sneaks into a rival school of magic, intent on stealing a formula for a powerful enchantment. If detected, she will shrink and eat any potential witnesses... but only as a last resort.
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Word Count: 6,750 approx
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This is the third part (out of three) of the request I wrote for Moonlightshadow
This is the end of the story! Yay :D
Once last time, I want to thank my good friends ArgarthanDestroyer12 ( https://www.deviantart.com/argarthandestroyer12/ ), ConcordantOpposition, and one who usually gets by anonymously (you will always know who you are :p) for their help proofreading and critiquing. Many great ideas for Part 2 and Part 3 came from them, and for that reason I can't thank them enough.
And... that’s pretty much it! I hope y’all enjoy the story :)
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Part 1: https://aryion.com/g4/view/481556
Part 2: https://aryion.com/g4/view/482721#item-itself
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Visual aid for the characters: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=keF-WYPY_pI
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Posted by pbysteria 6 years ago Report
This was really fun story. I liked Mahogany's inexperience and the size changing / hammerspace was a neat concept.
Posted by lllll1337 6 years ago Report
Thanks! Glad you enjoyed it :)
Posted by Sinnabun 6 years ago Report
Dude, this three parter was awesome! Really epic worldbuilding, great characters (especially Mahogany as the predator, ooooof~), and to top it all off a pretty satisfying ending! Loved this, hope to see more of this character~!
Posted by lllll1337 6 years ago Report
Thanks, friend~ :3
Posted by minasan 6 years ago Report
This really hit bang on a lot of things I like. I really like it when the prey is struggling inside the pred and the pred can really feel it. The particular blend of painful and enjoying it was very nice. Them being made just the right size to have a big impact on Mahogany without stretching her out comically like a balloon was great.
Posted by lllll1337 6 years ago Report
Glad I could provide something particular that you like! With this fetish it can be hard to find the specific stuff you like - niches within niches & all that, haha
Posted by Agora 6 years ago Report
All 3 parts had a pretty distinct feel to them! Pretty hot pred you devised there, and the scenario was fun to follow, especially chapter 2's disastrous stealth segment.
Posted by lllll1337 6 years ago Report
Thanks, man!