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I created a few OC's for this story! I think it turned out really well, since I had so much flexibility with how I wanted to write :p
Ruya (image): https://danbooru.donmai.us/posts/3008114
Murasa: https://danbooru.donmai.us/posts/1473166
Finished September 2018
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Posted by xvx17 6 years ago Report
Hi, I loved your story, just one thing, I would like there to be more communication between the prey and the predator
Posted by Nyusha 6 years ago Report
Yeah, I should add more dialogue, to be honest. There’s hardly a point in naming the characters if they don’t actually say anything >w> I will keep that in mind!
Posted by xvx17 6 years ago Report
ok gracias
Posted by xvx17 6 years ago Report
and one more thing, I loved that you introduced images of the two characters
Posted by Nyusha 6 years ago Report
Yeah I hope someday I can draw them myself!
Posted by xvx17 6 years ago Report
that would be great
Posted by Anonymouslion 5 years ago Report
Personally, I would have savored her more, and tickled her with my tongue to make her squirm on the way down!