Uploaded: 6 years ago
Views: 6,286
File size: 101.06 KiB
MIME Type: application/pdf
Comments: 10
Favorites: 25
This story was written in a script format. I originally started it as a comic or I guess film script, it was only going to be a few scenes long initially, but I kept going with it for awhile and originally posted it to the forums here years ago.
It's basically about a guy named Matt who lives in a world where swallowing people is an accepted thing, as long as there is consent, its fine. The world started out as trying to be somewhat plausible and treated vore as a more casual normal occurrence.
The story begins with Matt watching TV and witnessing a News Girl cough up something that could potentially have been against the law.
From there his journey begins.
I may actually come back to this and continue it or at least redo the ending at some point, if I feel inspired enough.
Matt
Age: 26
Build: Fit/Average
Looks/Style: Nothing too distinctive, slightly scruffy hair, dirty blonde.
Occupation: Nurse at hospital.
Other: Slightly a loner.
Samantha
Age: 27
Build: Slender/Average
Looks/Style: Not a girly girl, blonde, hair done but a bit messy usually, pretty but ever so slightly boyish.
Occupation: Electronic store clerk
Other: Smoker
Esther
Age: 29
Build: Average
Looks/Style: Professional news presenter, casual wear outside, brunette faint blonde streaks.
Occupation: News Reader/News person
Other: Enjoys swallowing people regularly, fun person, nice.
Amanda
Age: 30
Build: Petite
Looks/Style: Brunette, jeans, company shirt.
Occupation: Recruiter for a meal company
Katie
Age: 25
Build: Slender, but slightly fuller overall than Sam.
Looks/Style: Girly, wearing dress, soft material headband, 1960's inspired possibly, chestnut hair.
Dave
Age: 28
Build: Strong, heavier and more muscly than Matt
Looks/Style: Dark hair, handsome.
Mel
Age: 29
Build: Slender
Looks/Style: Naked, being digested
Other: Sister of Matt
Paul
Age: 30
Build: Average, a little thicker
Looks: Jacket, white shirt, popped collar, black spiked hair.
Other: Cocky/A bit annoying personality
Milly
Age: 28
Build: Average
Looks: Asian, creamy dress with only one shoulder covered.
Other: Caring, friendly, joker.
Please login to post a comment.
Posted by Gabriel0813 6 years ago Report
got too say it alright but a bit slow in the first few half
Posted by NeyNey 6 years ago Report
Yeah beginning might have a bit of build up, I think I was trying to establish the mundane everyday surroundings. Haven't read it in ages.
Posted by no one 6 years ago Report
Loved this story! I was wondering about the ending however. Who exactly did Matt eat that gave him such regret?
Posted by NeyNey 6 years ago Report
Hm I can't remember the details.. But, I think the detail about who it was didn't matter, it was just focusing on that he did feel bad?
Posted by DrKillianNight 6 years ago Report
liked it but ending was a bit disappointing never liked it was all a dream endings
Posted by bellylov3rs 6 years ago Report
Ending ruined it but there was enough dream sequences in the story to say the end was yet another dream sequence instead and it ended proper before with them happy together.
Posted by NeyNey 6 years ago Report
Yeah I regret the ending, I think I just wanted to wrap it up at the time though and didn't have a strong idea.
Posted by bellylov3rs 6 years ago Report
Well if you ever edit it you could remove that bit and just trail off on after his experience with being a pred as well, finding some sort of comfort and completion with it, helping him to finally make peace with his sister's decision all that time ago, and finally able to move on thanks to the beautiful girl digesting away inside him happily. Maybe throw in a scene or two for their wedding or a pregnancy surprise, would tie it all up nicely with your character arcs and themes.
:)
Posted by rugli 6 years ago Report
You can always rewrite. :)
Posted by NeyNey 6 years ago Report
Ha. Well, at this point prob just leave it. Focusing on OC stories atm.