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Due to the huge amount of positive feed back, I've decided to upload the next part of this story I'm working on. I currently have like 3 more story ideas for these characters. So I was thinking, should I continue this story further and work on a short series? Or stick to just 5 stories with these characters? Also this story isn't my best. Some feedback on formatting would be nice too. Like should I increase the text size?
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Posted by chronicles1001 6 years ago Report
In the first chapter Kaela kinda seemed to care and worry about others finding out but wouldn't Jerri going baby sitting n vore'ng the kids make it obvious for the parents that Jerri did something?
Asides from that lovely vore time
Posted by CrappyStories 6 years ago Report
Eh yeah I thought about that, but from the way I see it, the parents don't know where Jerri lives, so they can't really find her, so as far as the parents know, their kids just went missing.
Posted by chronicles1001 6 years ago Report
How did Jerri get the job without getting contacted lol and if it was a show up at door n get the job then the parents deserves to lose the kids. Poor kids not been able to choose their parents.
Posted by CrappyStories 6 years ago Report
In the opening line, Jerri is on the phone with one of the parents. I didn't write it, but basically she gave them a fake home address and got a new phone after she left.