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First thing I've ever uploaded on Eka's. Depending on if people like it or not, I'll write more. But it's pretty bad tbh lmao.
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Posted by colt2 5 years ago Report
It is not bad at all.A short and sweet tale, with the spice of a first time predator in the mix.
Posted by CrappyStories 5 years ago Report
Thanks for the feedback!
Posted by MidNightOwlArt 5 years ago Report
Nice and sweet story i like it.
I did found a error though “her Friends’ Scull” it Skull actually still sound the same honestly.
I actually like to see more like this i like willing and casual preds so this is right up my alley.
Posted by CrappyStories 5 years ago Report
Oh wtf I didn't even notice that. Thanks for pointing that out lol. Not quite sure why I wrote it like that.
Posted by sevensix 5 years ago Report
Haven't read it, but: one generally makes a paragraph break for each change of speaker.
Posted by CrappyStories 5 years ago Report
Eh yeah I know that. Just been way too lazy to to do that :P
Posted by sevensix 5 years ago Report
Then I'm definitely too lazy to try to read it.
Posted by Vmaster608 5 years ago Report
Not bad, I look forward to seeing what else you have in mind.
Posted by Tyslan03 5 years ago Report
Fun stuff, much better than your username suggests. I hope you'll write more.
Posted by DarkKuroi 5 years ago Report
I like it!