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This is that long commission I mentioned I was doing, at over 17k words I think this is the longest thing I have ever written.
Plots simple enough, Ace a herm stallion gets a hat trick meal of lovely mares in three different holes no less. ;)
this was a commission requested by Naarkerotics and takes place using his OC's in his reformation future setting, so depending on if he wants more stories you could see the ponies featured return for future lewd adventures.
this was a first for me in a lot of ways, first herm pred, first diaper story, first time I have shown juggling, which is a cock vore technique I devised and want to see significantly more of, as it factors in the prostate which no one seems to do with CV.
overall my only complaint with the story was it took forever to write, as it was a blast to do, but I felt like I was leaving other projects to flounder to work on it. as per usual I try my best in what I do, and I hope it shows in the product as I tackled a lot of themes in this one, so it is a hearty read, to say the least.
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Posted by KuroNekoChan 6 years ago Report
where did you get the tumbnail picture ?
Posted by doomfister 6 years ago Report
the Commissioner sent me it for the thumbnail.
Posted by Naarkerotics 6 years ago Report
http://www.furaffinity.net/user/fatponybutts/
Posted by doomfister 6 years ago Report
i see you have a profile pic now mate, no more sketchy Mr Anon ;)
Posted by simalst 6 years ago Report
What is a naark?
Posted by doomfister 6 years ago Report
look a comment up,Naark is naark.
Posted by simalst 6 years ago Report
I guess it is just another race of pony.
Posted by Naarkerotics 6 years ago Report
Its my nickname
Posted by simalst 6 years ago Report
I know :-) but in the story it is surely a race or am I wrong?
Posted by Naarkerotics 6 years ago Report
The twins, naarkessex and naarkerotics, keep a number of clones around of themselves to do stuff.
Stuff being plot convenient things rather than have to make a number of background characters up.