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Here we go. The final Chapter. I am so eager to see what y'all say I can hardly stand it. Reviews, reviews, reviews! Tell me your thoughts. I am dying to hear them.
Also, this was written a couple years ago. I went through and tweaked it recently but if you find any incongruities, please let me know.
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Posted by TheMysteriousSadSack 6 years ago Report
Alright, not bad, rather satisfying end. A bit on the ambiguous end, but im quite fine with that. Theres heavy implecations that Tor gets Eric back and comes out on top with her family so it wraps up nicely. If i had to criticize anyrhing id say the ending felt cramped. Like there was too much going on in one chapter if that makes any sense. It was still good tp read though so im not too hung up about it. Not exactly the ride into the sunset i was expecting but itll do. Solid 8 from me
Posted by JinxedMyself 6 years ago Report
Thanks! I’ll go back and tweak the pacing later on, when I do revisions. Tonight I only tweaked a few things for flow and continuity and put it out there. I’m so glad to have such a faithful reader on this journey with me. Hopefully you’ll stick around for what’s to come!
Posted by SnekTamerPoms 5 years ago Report
Is there gonna be an epilogue?
Posted by JinxedMyself 5 years ago Report
I'm actually working on a sequel!