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The Toyoharas decide to surprise Yusuke with something special for his birthday and use hormone supplements to make themselves start lactating. Little do they know, this gift of theirs will cause an all but permanent change in their mutual boyfriend, forcing them to make a tough decision…
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Posted by bartek21 6 years ago Report
great story !!!
Please more !!!!
Posted by F1reDem0n 6 years ago Report
I don't think this story gets enough credit with how believable and amazing it is. Each character comes across as a person that could exist in our own world and have their own believable personalities.
This is on the level of Notabot when it comes to characters, setting and story telling. Since he's up there as making some amzing content. You deserve props for this truly.
Posted by Elpie 6 years ago Report
why, thank you :) i admit that i sometimes stress over what i write here not being very good considering how much time, effort, and thought i put into all of it so it's nice to hear such a constructive comment :) i just hope the story, characters, and worlds of my other projects outside this one turn out as good
Posted by F1reDem0n 6 years ago Report
The one critique I can give for this story?
That ending had better not be a permanent cliff hanger. :3
With how you ended it I sure hope we get a part two with this one. With how well everything else was done, laid out and executed, sure hope we can expect a second part to this amazing piece of work.