An alternate version of a story made by  NaughtyHungryLion. In his story, five kids get captured in the Pridelands, Simba swallows one of them and declares the others his slaves, each having to work for a different lion with Simba threatening to digest the child inside if they disobey.

In my version, I replaced Simba with Scar, as I thought that eating/enslaving children sounds more like him than the kind lion prince. Also, the lions were replaced with the hyena (Nala, the lioness in the beginning, was replaced with Shenzi) and the kids all have to work for Scar himself instead of an individual master. The only part which I completely rewrote was from the second paragraph of the second part, so the last two paragraphs are my creation. :D

I hope you enjoy this story, I don't know when I'll be able to make a sequel, neither is NaughtyHungryLion sure when he can continue his original story.

For all who want to read the "real" story: https://aryion.com/g4/view/469750

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