Not perfect, but I like it. Dynamic pose, you drew feet, and it's a side profile of her face. And great stomach shape too, easy to tell there's a person inside but still squishy. i.e. no water balloon shape.
That said, perspective seems weird, see side of the stomach more while her torso looks 1/3rd. Open hand she's resting on is shaped a little weird, and lots of empty space in the top right, could've used something there like dialogue. Think torso/pelvis sections are elongated too, and same goes for the arm. Like the soft shading but makes her skin seem strange. Meaty, oddly shiny. Sketchy lines make everything feel sorta messy too.
Read you're an art student so I'm viewing this more technically. Obviously, can use some real polish (not nail polish either), but your anatomy is good, and I wanna see more from you.
Posted by Devourerer132 6 years ago Report
Looks amazing
Posted by Devourerer132 6 years ago Report
I hope commissions open up~ I’m looking forward in buying one
Posted by innertrack 6 years ago Report
Holy crap - that's so hot!
Posted by nnn4463 6 years ago Report
Oh a lovely squishy looking gut
Excellent work
Posted by hibbyjibby 6 years ago Report
Not perfect, but I like it. Dynamic pose, you drew feet, and it's a side profile of her face. And great stomach shape too, easy to tell there's a person inside but still squishy. i.e. no water balloon shape.
That said, perspective seems weird, see side of the stomach more while her torso looks 1/3rd. Open hand she's resting on is shaped a little weird, and lots of empty space in the top right, could've used something there like dialogue. Think torso/pelvis sections are elongated too, and same goes for the arm. Like the soft shading but makes her skin seem strange. Meaty, oddly shiny. Sketchy lines make everything feel sorta messy too.
Read you're an art student so I'm viewing this more technically. Obviously, can use some real polish (not nail polish either), but your anatomy is good, and I wanna see more from you.
Posted by Bright 6 years ago Report
Cool lighting on this.
Posted by TaciturnTiger 6 years ago Report
Loving the imprints on her belly, as well as the more realistic shape and size compared to the usual rounded gut. <3
Posted by LittleKnight 6 years ago Report
The shading is very well done keep up the good work. I like how the stomach gives off a certain shine but isn't overwhelming.