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One year later Abigail is invited to a reunion over dinner with some of the girls from her old gang, but unbeknownst to them she has a different meal plan in mind.
This ended up being much longer than I expected, and as a result I'm later to upload it, and I apologize.
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Posted by rabidPsionic 5 years ago Report
There's no need for apology when the result is just as good.
Posted by Racklin1899 5 years ago Report
Thanks man, but I generally have trouble sticking to schedules and I 'm trying to get better at it. Glad you enjoyed it though!
Posted by AllRightAllNight 5 years ago Report
This is great! I really like how you drew out the main event to build anticipation, while still keeping a solid pace throughout.
Posted by Racklin1899 5 years ago Report
Thanks, I was a bit unsure how well it would work since some of ti wasn't planned and just came to me as I was writing. Thanks for reading!