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Seas, Sacrifices, and Stomachs, Part 2 By skorpio -- Report

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Some maidens were kidnapped and some heroes went to save them, but then everything went wrong. This is a tale of monsters, of heroes, and those who never give up even in the belly of a whale.

Part 2 of longer story. Part 1 is here: https://aryion.com/g4/view/507820

A short follow-up is here: https://aryion.com/g4/view/507823

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Nalzindar

Posted by Nalzindar 6 years ago Report

A rather nice and epic story about the dangers of the seas. And it was funny to see that it went well with the nice people : )

skorpio

Posted by skorpio 6 years ago Report

Thanks! I wanted to try my hand at an adventure story, and I'm glad you enjoyed it!

ClosetedTiny

Posted by ClosetedTiny 2 years ago Report

Aaaawwwww, I love the ending! My personal favourite character is Ismene (also love your naming process!) and very happy for her ending and character herself!

But I loved most of the characters! Do kind of wish there was some more development between Nikias and Alcyone other than "Childhood friends". I can understand having to talk about everyone means that you can't get into details too much, and it can get overwhelming trying to remember what each character looked like (since they are all unique).

But I loved both chapters and the happy endings for all! Thank you for writing this!