really like the colors and facial expression.
neck and arms look a little unfinished with the blending, but honestly don't think anyone would notice.
maybe add a little more folds to her clothes, would also sell the slightly slouched shoulder look that I think you're going for. also the perspective on the hand seems a little wonky, the index finger side of her ride hand seems pointed into her left palm, while the part near the pinky seems to warp to be flat agaisnt the palm. Also just to sell the clenched hand thing a bit more, try and have a sheer angle at the tips of the fingers to show like a tension or clawness to them. I notice you do that in the actual pose, but to our perspective its not seen that way.
really though, you're facial expressions are phenomenal. Especially the eyes, brows and lips.
I honestly didn't mean for this little thing to go on so long, but I just started rambling.
Posted by [Dinobonoid] 5 years ago Report
Your work is really beautiful, really glad to have you join the community.
Posted by Bright 5 years ago Report
She looks cute.
Posted by ninjajoeman 5 years ago Report
really like the colors and facial expression.
neck and arms look a little unfinished with the blending, but honestly don't think anyone would notice.
maybe add a little more folds to her clothes, would also sell the slightly slouched shoulder look that I think you're going for. also the perspective on the hand seems a little wonky, the index finger side of her ride hand seems pointed into her left palm, while the part near the pinky seems to warp to be flat agaisnt the palm. Also just to sell the clenched hand thing a bit more, try and have a sheer angle at the tips of the fingers to show like a tension or clawness to them. I notice you do that in the actual pose, but to our perspective its not seen that way.
really though, you're facial expressions are phenomenal. Especially the eyes, brows and lips.
I honestly didn't mean for this little thing to go on so long, but I just started rambling.
Posted by cuten 5 years ago Report
I used a reference image for the hand that was closer to a profile view than the face so that's probably why ^^ thank you for the criticism