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Overwhelmed by her conflicting feelings after watching another human being get eaten, Tanisha runs away from the prince, goes into her room, and tries to go to sleep. But she ends up having an interesting little dream.
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I might make more of this, but I’m definitely taking a break from this particular storyline for now.
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Posted by Nalzindar 5 years ago Report
It was a nice follow-up to your previous story and I hope you will continue this because this seems to be the start of something good.
Regarding the princess' dream, I believe it somehow should have encouraged her to exercise a bit more if she really should need to run^^
But the story was great and the descriptions wonderful, it was an interesting dream of her as you said, I hope those tow will become a bit more friendly and open towards each other in the future if you decide to write more :)
Posted by ThickAsHoney 5 years ago Report
Well I’m glad you liked it! I’m thinking about writing more, because I have plenty of disjointed ideas... but the main two problems are that I don’t want the vore to be repetitive, and I want the plot and setting to make some degree of sense. So I’ll have to plan things out first.
I guess I could make Tanisha exercise? I’m not planning on having any pre existing or new character undergo a major change in appearance, so I wouldn’t write her as losing any weight, but I am considering making her become more assertive over time, and exercise could be a part of that? But I’m definitely going to have Tanisha and Ambrose’s relationship improve over time, so you can look forward to that!