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A free diver and daredevil finds herself the perfect target, this was her plan....but it goes too well to plan.
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Posted by torontofan 5 years ago Report
Wwoooooowwww. Loved it. I can honestly say not once have I ever felt suspense and dread in a vore story before. The way you described the change of scenery underwater, the blackness of deep, open water to the desperate struggles being written off by onlookers as part of her act. Wow. I was completely sucked into it, my heart is still beating a little fast. Easily the best short story I have ever had the pleasure to read. And my soft spot for belching up clothes also was adressed in a polite manner. 13/10
Posted by Entity 5 years ago Report
Why thank you, i'm glad you enjoyed it so much to give a great comment. It's really appreciated ;)
Posted by Bright 5 years ago Report
Really lovely description of fighting against the predator.