Ya know, I really missed the your attention to back-story detail, let alone the character development in your very consistent, well delivered story line. It casually brings the reader along for the ride.
Other authors only approach your standard.
Now in this story, is your character MacDugal the same MacDugal that made short work of Chloe in your 'Really Fast Food' story?
It's very rewarding to know you enjoy those things. It makes my stories longer and slower-paced than many authors on Aryion, but it's how I love to write.
This is indeed the same Macdougal! I had a great time writing for him, and I've wanted to include him in other stories for a long time. Well done for noticing!
Posted by Genericcook 5 years ago Report
Another great one! Excited for the conclusion
Posted by MagicianXV 5 years ago Report
Thank you so much for reading and commenting! Im glad you're enjoying the story!
Posted by lorenzo64 5 years ago Report
Ya know, I really missed the your attention to back-story detail, let alone the character development in your very consistent, well delivered story line. It casually brings the reader along for the ride.
Other authors only approach your standard.
Now in this story, is your character MacDugal the same MacDugal that made short work of Chloe in your 'Really Fast Food' story?
Or, would that be telling?
Posted by MagicianXV 5 years ago Report
It's very rewarding to know you enjoy those things. It makes my stories longer and slower-paced than many authors on Aryion, but it's how I love to write.
This is indeed the same Macdougal! I had a great time writing for him, and I've wanted to include him in other stories for a long time. Well done for noticing!
Posted by lorenzo64 5 years ago Report
<Grin>
Posted by Drakira 4 years ago Report
I'm really excited for the next part. It seems like the ending will be fantastic based on everything leading up to it.
Posted by dvh123 4 years ago Report
Great story so far! Looking forward to the conclusion.
Posted by Genericcook 4 years ago Report
Hoping for more!
Posted by Genericcook 4 years ago Report
Damn, really liked this one