The first part of the very first vore series I've ever written back in 2009. Lightly edited for puncuation and story flow but otherwise unchanged from my original writing. And it shows.

I tried rewriting this series a few years ago. But I ended up liking the original characters and plot a lot better.

One big thing I find myself having a problem with in this story is the whole Jackie thing. I didn’t (and still don’t) fully understand polyamory at the time and didn’t understand that Lilly straight up cheats on Ty in that scenario. That really wasn’t what I was trying to go for in that scene.

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