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The Cold Vore Finale: The World's Fall By Jazzyjoe94 -- Report

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The final stages of the cold war is decided by a epic battle on top of the Berlin wall!

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Deathbat99

Posted by Deathbat99 5 years ago Report

Interesting concept

VoreSinner

Posted by VoreSinner 5 years ago Report

Okay i'll admit this was a bit disappointing for the end either as there either Russia kept control or lost it with Ana fate unknown and Jessica working like a gilf or Ana secret reunion with her mother.

I disappointed Ana does die in one of the ending as Jessica avengers Hilda and get her ending or Ana eat Jessica and get her ending or something.

Sorry if this is negative it was a good series but i feel characters were introduced veey quickly and killed off permanently just as quickly with a weak end. Like what happen to all the reforming they could do with oit pills or such in the beginning?

Aside from that love the series.

Jazzyjoe94

Posted by Jazzyjoe94 5 years ago Report

It was meant to be a bitter sweet end to make it feel varied so i purposely made it they way i did

VRunner

Posted by VRunner 5 years ago Report

I dont get the absorption tag for this there none that i can tell?

Also why is Anastasia the only character that never lost or been digested?

Also why isn't Hilda or the pregnant woman back?

Jazzyjoe94

Posted by Jazzyjoe94 5 years ago Report

Absorption tag is there because svetlana fuses with Tsuyu. Also the pregnant woman was used a character for 1 story, hilda will have her own spin off series.