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A grumble emerged from Chloe’s stomach. A month had passed since she had devoured Max and the red-headed stranger, so the time had come for her to devour another girl. She had been keeping tabs on this one girl with short blonde hair and an air of superiority. Chloe thought she’d make excellent prey for an old fashioned hunt through the woods, the way she thought prehistoric women would have caught their prey. She had always wanted to try it and she could almost perfectly picture the hunt. She’d stalk the girl the day before to raise her paranoia, then once the sun set she’d lure her into the woods. Then she’d strip away all her clothes, let out a cry to terrify her prey, and chase her deep into the woods. When the moment was right, she’d circle her prey, let her cry in fear, then finally pounce on her and swallow her up. Yes, that hunt would truly scratch the predatory itch she’d been feeling for the past few months.
 
 
Unfortunately for Chloe, she would have to put her feral plans on hold. Her phone rang, upon answering it she found it to be Kate Marsh, Max’s other friend that she had made at school. Her petite frame and dirty blonde hair always put into a bun combined with her always formal clothing and devout faith gave her the almost perfect appearance of innocence, had it not been for the incriminating video of her performing some very mature acts at a party while drugged.
 
 
“Hello? Chloe? It’s Kate Marsh, Max’s friend. We met once when Max introduced us, remember? I… well, I’m not sure you’re gonna believe me, but I think I found Max.” Kate’s voice was shaken, making Chloe’s heart sink slightly. There was no way she could’ve known, but Kate’s tone hinted that she may have stumbled onto something she shouldn’t have.
 
 
“Really, you found Max?” Chloe said doubtfully, “You’re sure it’s not just some girl who looks a bit the same, and you’re desperate for her to come back? Trust me, Max ran off on us. She did it five years ago when she moved to Seattle, and now she’s done it again. Now you know how I felt when she did this the first time.” Despite Chloe’s initial lie, her story of Max leaving her suddenly was true. It’s what made eating her former best friend so easy.
 
 
“No, Chloe, she’s…” Kate choked, seemingly on the verge of tears, “She’s… I… A week after Max went missing, I was talking a walk in a park and I found, well, I found Max’s underwear. Don’t ask me how I know it was hers I just know, okay? Well, I thought maybe… maybe she was assaulted here. I tried to tell the police but they just kept up their story of her running away. So I started looking in the woods nearby. And today, just now, I found.... I found a giant pile of, well, poop. And in it is two skulls. Human skulls, and bones, like it ate them whole. And one of the skulls, the teeth have fillings that are exactly like the ones Max has. Chloe, I… I think this is Max. I think something ate Max and- and left her like this.” At this point Kate broke down sobbing into the phone. Kate was right, she did find Max, but Chloe couldn’t admit that she knew that. She’d have to get rid of Kate, fast
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  “Listen, Kate, I’m not sure what you’re looking at, but it can’t be what you’re thinking of. It’s gotta be some sort of leftover of a prank some jackass pulled a long time ago. There’s no animal or anything that would attack a human in this part of the country, let alone be big enough to be able to swallow someone whole, like you said. Listen, just, can I meet you? I think you need someone to calm you down, and you can tell me more about this in person.” Chloe reasoned. It might not have been the most convincing lie, but she had to stall Kate, and get to her.
 
 
  “O-okay,Chloe,” Kate sniffed, “Meet me at the dorms at Blackwell, you know where that is, right?” Chloe did indeed, it was the school she dropped out of after all, ”I don’t feel safe here. Whether this... thing is real or not, it’s just horrifying to see, and the teeth fillings are too similar, and I definitely found Max’s panties. Please come to the dorms as fast as you can, I’ll see you soon.” With that, Kate hung up. Chloe was already on her way to her beat up truck outside. She didn’t need to worry about her mother asking where she was off to in a rush, she shat her into a grave in the backyard a year ago, after she caught Chloe dumping the remains of one of her first prey into the dumpster behind the diner her mother worked at. Thankfully Chloe was able to gather enough money to get by selling weed and pawning off any belongings her meals had.
 
 
  After a quick drive across town with the sun setting she arrived at Blackwell and jogged to the dorms, wanting to get there as fast as she could, but at the same time not wanting to alert anyone into thinking she was suspicious. Outside the dorms Chloe saw a few people, but none of them she recognized as Kate. She must be inside the dorms, Chloe reasoned. Heading up the short flight of stairs to the entrance, she stopped a tall, thin girl with a low cut shirt showing off much of her otherwise modest cleavage heading down the stairs at the same time.
 
 
  “Hey, Chloe asked her, “I’m wondering which room is Kate Marsh’s, do you know her? I’m here to visit her.”
 
 
  “Uh, yeah, it’s the first floor, three doors down on the left, right next to the maintenance closet and on the other side of the bathrooms. Who are you, by the way?” the brunette asked, curious as to Chloe’s relationship to Kate.
 
 
  “The name’s Chloe, Kate wanted to talk to me about something that happened earlier. And you are?” Chloe asked in return. After dealing with Kate, she’d have to find this girl and deal with her too, she knew that visiting Kate moments before she was about to ‘go missing’ would be incredibly suspicious.
 
 
  “The name’s Dana, nice to meet you. I hope you’re able to cheer Kate up. First that video, then her best friend goes missing, and now something else has got her upset. But if you’ll excuse me, I’ve got a date. See you again soon?” Dana turned to leave after Chloe gave one last response.
 
 
  “Yeah, probably. And don’t worry about Kate, if I have any skills, she won’t be feeling bad much longer.” Chloe knew this would set off alarm bells to Dana as soon as she realized Kate was missing, but she couldn’t help but tease her eating habits.
 
 
  Chloe followed Dana’s instructions and easily found herself at Kate’s room. She knocked on the door and announced herself, “Kate, it’s me, Chloe. I’m here to talk about what you saw.”
 
 
  She had barely finished speaking when the door opened up and a hand shot out from the door and quickly pulled Chloe into the dark room. To her surprise, the person who pulled her in was not Kate, but none other than the short haired blonde who she had been planning on hunting. She had a look of hostility on her face, but the moment she saw Chloe’s face, her eyes widened slightly and her expression eased.
 
 
  “Huh, it’s you, the blue-haired girl. Of course it is,” the girl remarked, letting go of her grip on Chloe and shutting the door.
 
 
  “What do you mean ‘of course it is?’” Chloe retorted, “Who the hell are you?”
 
 
  “I mean, I’ve seen you eyeing me up around town this past month, with that hungry look in your eyes. I know that behavior well. Honestly before I saw you i thought I was the only one,” The girl was then cut off by Chloe.
 
 
  “I have no idea what you’re talking about, I’ve never seen you before in my life,” Chloe was bluffing, but it was all she could do.
 
 
  “Listen, you’ve got nothing to be afraid of from me,” the girl explained, “I’m like you, I’m a predator. I eat and digest girls just like you. The name’s Victoria, by the way, Victoria Chase.”
 
 
  Chloe eased herself upon Victoria’s admission, “Chloe Price. So you eat people too, a predator you call it? Well then, what are you doing here in Kate’s room, and where is Kate?”
 
 
  “Kate’s right here,” Victoria gestured to the sofa nearby, and as Chloe’s eyes adjusted to the low light, she saw Kate tied up and naked on the couch, fear in her eyes, “I heard her mumbling to herself. ‘She was eaten, she was eaten,’ she was saying. I thought she found the remains of one of my meals, so I came to take care of her. I asked her some questions first, and found out she didn’t find one of mine, she found what I’m assuming is one of yours. Either way, she also told me you were coming so I planned on ambushing you then eating you both,” This last comment put Chloe on edge, but when Victoria saw that she quickly added, “but now I’m not gonna eat you, of course. I’m gonna tell you, I’m rather excited about having another pred around. There’s finally someone I can relate to about all of this and,” she paused, “someone who can provide a bit of competition for food.” Victoria gave a smirk after her last comment.
 
 
  “That’s it?” Chloe responded, “ just, ‘hey there, I eat girls and I was gonna eat you but now I’m not because you eat girls too so let’s be friends?’ Really?”
 
 
  “Well, is that so unreasonable? Besides, I’m sure there’s a lot you and I could accomplish together. Maybe even find out more about each other,” Victoria said with a wink, “Just let me eat Kate real quick and we can move forward.” Kate gave a muffled scream after Victoria said she’d eat her. After a small pause, Chloe gave Victoria a nod. With that, Victoria sauntered over to Kate, ready to devour her.
 
 
  “Ready for my stomach to rip you apart, Katey?” Victoria taunted in a seductive voice, her hand reaching down to finger Kate’s exposed nethers. Kate screamed again through the binding around her mouth. “Aww, that’s too bad. I mean, you won’t have to deal with me or any other bullies once you’re flowing through my intestines.” Victoria then ripped Kate’s mouth binding off, letting Kate let out one pitiful scream before quickly unhinging her jaw and engulfing Kate’s entire head in one move. She quickly moved down Kate’s torso, and once her small breasts were in her mouth she paused. Victoria ran her tongue over Kate’s chest, both for taste and for pleasure, while using her free hand to untie Kate’s hands. Kate attempted to flail her arms around and push Victoria away, but she had already slid too far into Victoria to do anything of use. With Kate now about halfway down her throat, Victoria hoisted Kate up using the hand she was fingering her with. Victoria then leaned her head back, allowing gravity to let Kate easily slide down her gullet. Kate’s hips slid quickly past Victoria’s mouth, as at this point Victoria seemed much more keen on filling her belly rather than tasting her meal. With only Kate’s legs outside of her, Victoria felt safe to let go of her and begin to tease herself through her pants, not caring about Chloe’s observation. Once she arrived at Kate’s bound ankles, Victoria let out a frustrated grunt at being halted, and quickly untied the last of the rope before downing the last bit of Kate. Victoria let out a gasp, glad to be able to breath again, as Kate began to fully settle into her stomach, leaving Victoria’s torso to bulge out and her shirt unable to cover it.
 
 
  “Well the- *Uuuurrraaap*” Victoria burped, “Excuse me, well then, now that you know I’m legit, anything else you wanna discuss before you go on your way?” Victoria seemed to be mellowing out now that her appetite had been sated, despite the vigorous struggling of her dinner.
 
 
  “Well I still need to eat. I can’t exactly go out and order a burger. You of all people should know, this thing’s shot my metabolism, anything less than a person would shoot right through me before I got any nutrition out of it,” Chloe stated. At this point, it was indeed crossing her mind to just eat Victoria then and there. It would definitely be the most filling meal she ever had, even more than her last with Max and the redhead.
 
 
  “Well,” Victoria said while thinking, “I do have these two girls who practically worship me, Courtney and Taylor. They used to just be lackeys of mine, but ever since they found out about my diet, they’re practically my servants. I think they secretly want me to eat them, but I doubt they’ll say no if I tell them to feed themselves to you.”
 
 
  Chloe, upon hearing this offer, began reconsidering eating Victoria. “Hmm, that actually sounds pretty good, call one of ‘em over.”
 
 
  “How about I call them both? Think of it as a gift on me,” Victoria offered as she reached for her phone. She typed into it quick and began to call the girls. “Hey, Taylor. Get Courtney, i think it’s time for something you two have been waiting for,” Chloe heard a scream of excitement come from the phone, “Yes, Taylor, that. Now come to Kate’s room, that’s where I’m at.” Victoria hung up her phone and told Chloe that they were on their way.
 
 
  A quick minute of silence passed, intermittently broken by Victoria’s stomach groaning and Kate inside screaming, causing Victoria to let out a few small burps. Inside, Kate was slowly but surely losing energy, her struggles becoming weaker and weaker. Three quick knocks on the door broke the silence, announcing that Taylor and Courtney had arrived.
 
 
Victoria cracked open the door at first to make sure it was the expected guests, “Hey girls, glad to see you. Before you come in I’ve gotta tell you, there’s another girl in here but she’s cool, alright? We aren’t caught.”
 
 
“Right right right!” Taylor said from the other side, before practically shoving herself through the doorway, followed by Courtney right behind her.
 
 
“Oh my goooosh!” Courtney exclaimed, “Is that Kate? Did you really eat her? You never eat anyone from school!”
 
 
“Yeah well, these are extraordinary times. Kate stumbled onto a predator in town and needed to be taken care of before she figured it all out. Speaking of that pred, this is her, meet Chloe,” Victoria gestured to Chloe, with Chloe giving a nonchalant wave to the two girls.
 
 
Now that they were in the room, Chloe could get a good view of the two. Courtney was the shorter of the two, with neck length black hair with dark purple streaks. Her body seemed pretty plain to Chloe, but she did note that Courtney had the larger breasts of the two. Taylor had a round face and much longer blonde hair reaching down to her own modest chest, complete with flat bangs.
 
 
“Heya, Chloe, did Victoria just say you were a pred? We all thought Victoria was the only one, me and Courtney even tried, but, wow, this is so cool,” Taylor gushed, “I have so many questions. Do you have to eat someone once a month like Victoria? How’d you find out you were a pred? What are you-”
 
 
“Alright Taylor, that’s enough,” Victoria interrupted, “I called you two here because you’re gonna feed yourselves to Chloe, she needs to eat just like I do,” she told the girls, patting her gut, which elicited one final push from Kate before she finally gave up altogether. She whispered one last no before she passed out, never to wake up.
 
 
“What?!” the two girls cried out in unison, “But I thought,” Taylor continued, “we thought you were gonna…” she trailed off when she saw the stern, burning look Victoria was giving her. She could not deny Victoria. “Alright then, if that’s what you want us to do,” she said with resignation.
 
 
“Who do you want first Chloe?” Courtney asked, already pulling her shirt off over her head.
 
 
“Ya know, I think I’ll have you first, since you’re being such a good sport, so hurry up and hop in,” Chloe said and then pointed to her open mouth.
 
 
“Right right right, lemme finish undressing,” Courtney said in a rush while quickly pulling down her pants and underwear together, and then just as quickly wiggled out of her bra, Taylor’s progress in undressing not far behind hers. Now that the girls were mostly all the way naked, Chloe could make note of Courtney’s chest freckles and Taylor’s unshaven pussy. She thought that the two girls were actually pretty hot, it was a shame that they were going to be nothing but shit within the next few hours.
 
 
“Alright Chloe, I’m ready,” Courtney said standing almost rigid, her nerves all twisted up in excitement, “just, um, don’t digest me too fast, I kinda wanna try getting off inside you, but it takes me a little bit, okay?”
 
 
“No promises, it’s not like you can control the speed you digest food at, can you? But I’ll try to swallow air for you,” Chloe bargained, knowing full well that she’d digest the girls much slower if she didn’t touch herself while they were digesting, but she couldn’t help herself.
 
 
“Right, well, here goes…” Courtney reached her hands out in front of Chloe, who happily obliged her and opened her mouth so that Courtney could stick her hands in. A willing meal was something she never had, so Chloe wanted to really enjoy it. She closed her eyes and slowly started sucking Courtney’s arms in, pulling her closer and closer in.
 
 
“Oh wow, your throat’s pretty tight, Chloe. I thought it’d be kinda loose and stretchy, ya know?” Chloe hummed a response, Courtney's arms blocking her trachea. Chloe, with her eyes closed and Courtney, lost in the tight sensation of Chloe's throat, did not notice how far up Courtney's arms Chloe was until Courtney’s chin hit Chloe in the forehead. Chloe let out a grunt of pain and looked up angrily at Courtney.
 
 
“Ah shit, I’m sorry Chloe, I’ll just uh, lower my head and you can-” Courtney tried to apologize but was cut off by Chloe shoving her head down and into her mouth. She resolved that she’d have to take it slow with Taylor instead, she wasn’t gonna risk getting hit again by Courtney. From inside Chloe’s mouth, Courtney let out muffled a muffled goodbye to Victoria and tried to tell Taylor that she’d see her again soon, but no one except Chloe understood. With one powerful gulp Chloe was already at the top of Courtney’s chest. Putting Courtney’s breasts in her mouth, Chloe felt her give a sudden struggle and saw that Taylor had approached and began to lick Courtney’s pussy.
 
 
“Sorry,” Taylor explained, “if Victoria’s speed is anything to go by, Courtney’s definitely not gonna be able to cum in time if I don’t help her.” Taylor then returned her face to Courtney’s crotch, as Chloe continued to gulp her way down Courtney’s body. Once Chloe finally reached Courtney’s hip, she was able to stare Taylor in the eyes as both of them simultaneously began to run their tongues over Courtney’s pussy. Their tongues occasionally running over one another, both girls found the shared action to be incredibly arousing as they both began to touch themselves. Chloe was even able to see out of the corner of her eye Victoria reaching under her smoothing gut to pleasure herself to the sight. At this point, all the strange new sensations Courtney was feeling on her vagina and throughout her whole body reach the breaking point and she began to orgasm as her face began to enter Chloe’s hot and humid stomach. Her body spasmed, causing her to slowly wiggle herself deeper into Chloe. At the same time, her legs tightened around Taylor’s head, trapping her in between them.
 
 
“Courtney,” Taylor exclaimed, “Courtney let go, I’m stuck!” Taylor slapped Courtney’s thigh in an attempt to alert her, but all that accomplished was prolonging Courtney’s orgasm. Chloe, meanwhile, could not help but allow Courtney deeper into herself, and with her came Taylor’s head. Chloe continued to swallow, but once she reached Taylor’s shoulders and Courtney’s knees she finally realized that Taylor was being swallowed as well. This sent Chloe into a bit of a panic. She could hold her breath long enough to eat one girl at a slow pace, but not much longer. She’d have to hurry herself up if she didn’t want to choke. She began to chug the two girls at a lightning pace, even using her hands to shove Taylor in and not even paying any attention when Courtney’s feet finally went down her throat. She was too focused on fully devouring Taylor to even noticed that Victoria had now come up to help push Taylor in. After several final gulps, Chloe finally got the last of Taylor in her mouth, closing her lips around Victoria’s fingers before she quickly pulled them out, knowing full well that Chloe’s mouth would be like a vacuum at the moment. As the last of Taylor passed her windpipe, Chloe let out a deep gasp, eager to get air back into her lungs.
 
 
“Well then, I hope you’re satisfied,” Victoria said to Chloe, “I’m gonna miss those two, but I’m sure you and I will have a lot more fun together than I would’ve with those two.”
 
 
“Is that so?” Chloe asked, raising an eyebrow. She knew that right now, Victoria was experiencing the same sensations that she did whenever she ate someone, that meant that at this point they were both incredibly horny.
 
 
“I really think so,” Victoria answered, putting a hand on Chloe’s cheek before pulling her in for a kiss, her much softer gut fitting around Chloe’s gut. She could feel from the extremely invigorated movements that Taylor and Courtney were already going at it within Chloe. The two predators made out passionately, giving in to the urges brought on by digestion. It was not long before the two were lying on Kate’s bed, Victoria’s head buried beneath Chloe’s gut and eating her out. Victoria could hear moans and the occasional yelp come from Taylor and Courtney, still going at it despite being on the verge of death.
 
 
“Victoria,” Chloe called out in between gasps, “I’m gonna cum, you’re gonna make me cum.” True to her word, Chloe immediately climaxed, screaming out and arching her back. With this movement, Taylor and Courtney let out one final scream before being crushed by Chloe’s stomach. Whether it was a cry of pain or orgasm, Chloe and Victoria would never know, nor care for that matter. Chloe panted as she recuperated from her orgasm, while Victoria crawled out from under her distended gut. She gave Chloe’s guts a couple firm pats to confirm that the girls within were actually dead. Feeling the belly give to the pressure, and hearing the snapping of weakened bones, Victoria was mildly astonished, “Wow, your stomach kicked their asses. It usually takes me two orgasms for my stomach to kill my prey, and you’ve gotten two in one.”
 
 
“Guess I’ve got a strong gut,” Chloe said while sitting up, “now, how about I return the favor?”
 
 
“Oh you’d better,” Victoria said coyly before taking Chloe’s place on the bed. Chloe in turn took Victoria’s place at the foot of the bed, resting on her own bloated stomach so that she could pleasure Victoria. Over the next ten minutes, Chloe and Victoria enjoyed their having sex as both of their stomachs shrank and rounded out, Chloe’s doing so much faster than Victoria’s. Soon, Chloe was able to make Victoria also climax just as strong as she had. Chloe’s pussy licking skills were thanks in no small part to her previous sexual experience with her former friend Rachel Amber, who had befriended Chloe after Max had left, and had the honors of being Chloe’s first prey.
 
 
“That was great,” Victoria complimented Chloe, “But… I’ve got a feeling that we’ve got one more thing to do before we go to bed.” Victoria was of course referring to releasing their prey. Both girls were beginning to feel the pressure of their former meals pressing their insides.
 
 
“If you don’t mind, I brought some bags that I’d like you to go in. We might be next to the toilets, but the school will know something’s up if they find human bones in the septic tank, not to mention that the toilets would clog. It’s also not worth the risk to even step out into the halls with these bulges.” Indeed the girls still had bumps in their bellies making them look heavily pregnant. Their bodies as well had grown, especially their breasts and asses. Chloe would often lose most of the curves she received from her prey over the next month, her body running of the nutrients stored in the fat, but she never quite returned to the size she was before her meals.
 
 
“If you insist. Hand over a bag, Courtney and Taylor are ready to come out,” Victoria gestured at Victoria to hand her a bag.
 
 
“Yeah of course,” Victoria pulled two large, clear bags off the desk in the room, “Kate’s about to come out too.”
 
 
Taking the bag from Victoria, Chloe laid it open on the ground and squatted over it.
 
 
“Oh, you’re just gonna do it right there like that,” Victoria said with some surprise, while she herself began to set down her bag.
 
 
“Hey, I gotta go, I’m not embarrassed, and you don’t seem to be either,” Chloe gestured to Victoria’s bag as she began to push.
 
 
“Nah, I just thought you’d be,” Victoria said as she also squatted over her bag. In tandem, the girls began to shit out their prey, boneflecked logs filled both bags as the brown remains of Kate, Courtney, and Taylor emptied from the intestines of Victoria and Chloe. Both girls let out restricted moans throughout, while neither were embarrassed about shitting in front of each other, they were embarrassed to let the other know that it was giving them some pleasure. After a few minutes of squatting, the skull of Kate made its way out of Victoria, signifying the end of the bowel movement. A few seconds later Courtney and Taylor’s skulls followed out of Chloe’s asshole, her own shit coming to an end.
 
 
“Welp, that’s that, then. Didja remember toilet paper?” Chloe asked Victoria.
 
 
“I’m way ahead of you,” Victoria said, already wiping her ass of the last bits of Kate and tossing Chloe the roll of toilet paper.
 
 
As Chloe was wiping, Victoria decided to make some small talk while tying up Kate’s bag, “Ya know, I’ve noticed that the skulls always seem to stay intact and come out last, but almost none of the other bones do,”
 
 
“Yeah, you’re right,” Chloe said while tying up Courtney and Taylor’s bag, “Maybe it’s because round enough to make it through okay, or maybe it’s the will of whatever lets us do this.”
 
 
“Either way, grab your bag. We’re heading to my room next door, I can keep the bags safe there before getting rid of them,” Victoria explained.
 
 
“But wait I thought you said it’s too risky to be seen going outside with big belles, now you want us to carry bags of shit with human skulls down the hall?” Chloe questioned.
 
 
Victoria sighed before answering, “There’s no one around in the direction of my room, just this room, my room, and Max’s room. In the direction of the toilets is everyone else who’s still alive and well. Now get your clothes on, you don’t wanna forget those in here.”
 
 
“Alright, forget I asked,” Chloe said, picking up her clothes. After the girls got dressed and Victoria picked up Taylor’s and Courtney’s clothes, Chloe picked up her bag and headed for the door. Victoria opened the door and quickly peeked out into the hall before waving for Chloe to follow her. After a quick, quiet jog of a couple yards, Victoria let herself and Chloe into her room. She then tossed the bag of Kate to the side of the room, and Chloe followed suit.
 
 
“So Chloe, it’s getting late and I’m sure you’re tired, you can stay the night here if you want and go home in the morning. I’m sure we could have some quality time together,” Victoria offered.
 
 
“You know, I think I wouldn’t mind that,” Chloe took up the offer. It didn’t take the girls long after that to begin to fuck once again, wanting to play with the additions their meals made. The skulls of Kate, Courtney, and Taylor watched on as the girls had their way with each other. Eventually the two passed out in each others arms, sleeping the rest of the night away.
 
 
When the sun rose and light flooded into Victoria’s room, the two awoke and said their goodbyes. “I wouldn’t mind doing this again next month, if you’re up for it,” Victoria told Chloe.
 
 
“I don’t think I’d mind either,” Chloe responded, “And by the way, I think I should tell you that I asked Dana for directions to Kate’s room when I got here. She’s probably gonna get suspicious once she finds out that Kate’s gone, so you might wanna deal with that.”
 
 
“Dana, huh? Thanks for letting me know. Don’t worry, I know how to deal with her. And if push comes to shove, she can just get the Kate treatment,” Victoria said, putting Chloe at ease.
 
 
The girls then said one last goodbye and then Chloe left. Driving home, her thoughts drifted back to the beginning of her meeting with Victoria, and realized that she still did not fully trust her. Little did she know, Victoria was thinking these same thoughts, and both girls knew that one way or another, one of them would betray and eat the other. The only question in their minds was who and when.
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Vore Is Strange 2 By Civilbarbarian -- Report

Heya, this is my first complete vore work, and really my first work of fiction that I'm sharing with the world. It's part 2 of a sort of collab with Coolwoman, part 1 is here.

https://aryion.com/g4/view/525680

Hope ya'll enjoy! More is definitely to come from the both of us!

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Coolwoman

Posted by Coolwoman 5 years ago Report

I read the whole thing and man I enjoyed. I want you to contiue with a part 3. I think a prequel with Chole and Rachel is coming. A spin-off before Max is eaten, perhaps the reason she finds out is because she is one as well

Civilbarbarian

Posted by Civilbarbarian 5 years ago Report

All excellent suggestions. I won't get started right away, but these are definitely in my queue. And if you find yourself getting impatient to explore one of those scenarios, don't be afraid to write them yourself, I don't wanna steal all the credit ;p

Coolwoman

Posted by Coolwoman 5 years ago Report

I am 100% gonna do the max one and the Chloe prequel. I like your stuff, im excited to see what you are gonna put on this page. If you have ideas I would love to know!!!

Civilbarbarian

Posted by Civilbarbarian 5 years ago Report

Honestly I have both a billion ideas and zero. Like, I've had concepts, but no idea how to make them work or not be something that's already been written. But I'm excited to write anyway

Civilbarbarian

Posted by Civilbarbarian 5 years ago Report

Also, if you want to cross post this to your page, go right ahead!

Dyhrds

Posted by Dyhrds 5 years ago Report

Damn, I absolutely love life is strange! I play max on an RP server so reading stuff like this makes me blush oddly enough

Civilbarbarian

Posted by Civilbarbarian 5 years ago Report

What a coincidence, I also love LiS. I used to also be part of a LiS RP, but I was just a background character. I was always sorta dissapointed in the lack of LiS vore, so I'm glad to finally write some.

Dyhrds

Posted by Dyhrds 5 years ago Report

I don’t write much on here, but I might have to make something at some point heh.

xvx17

Posted by xvx17 5 years ago Report


I would like to start writing, but I do not know how

Civilbarbarian

Posted by Civilbarbarian 5 years ago Report

My advice would be to first get the story into your head, like what's gonna happen in it, why it's all happening, who's in the story, what are their plans in the story. You don't have to work that out from beginning to end either, you can start thinking of a story in the middle, in the beginning, or even start with how the story will end. Once you have the general idea of the plot, just start trying to put it into words, and don't worry if it doesn't look too good at first, you can go back and rewrite it as many times as you feel you need to in order to make it good. And even if you think you don't know how to improve it, often times when you write down a part of the story, you end up realizing how to rewrite a previous or future part of the story to better fit. I mean, I've even done that while typing this up. And even once you've got it all written down and it still doesn't feel quite right, don't worry. Read it over and find where you think you can improve. And writing is a skill, the more you write and practice, the better you'll be at it. If you want, the subreddit /r/writingprompts has a lot of story starters that you can use for inspiration. I hope this helps.

xvx17

Posted by xvx17 5 years ago Report

thanks for the tips but I mean where in my blog can I go to post a story

Civilbarbarian

Posted by Civilbarbarian 5 years ago Report

OH, silly me :p. You need to message Eka with a complete story of yours as a sample. Then you'll have your gallery enabled and you can start posting.

xvx17

Posted by xvx17 5 years ago Report


thanks, it is difficult to understand some things since I do not speak English xD. I hope you keep writing, you do it pretty well

Civilbarbarian

Posted by Civilbarbarian 5 years ago Report

Thank you!

xvx17

Posted by xvx17 5 years ago Report

No puedo dejar de leer esta historia, la tengo en mi top 3 de favoritas, espero que vuelvas a escribir pronto.

Civilbarbarian

Posted by Civilbarbarian 5 years ago Report

Hola. Lamento que me haya tomado tanto tiempo volver a escribir. La universidad y la depresión me han quitado mucho, pero tengo dos comisiones que deberían publicarse para fines de la próxima semana. Entonces podré volver a escribir más regularmente, ya que he mejorado (y necesito el dinero de la comisión). Gracias por quedarte.

xvx17

Posted by xvx17 5 years ago Report

Oh, wow! Volviste, que bueno que estes bien, yo tampoco he tenido mucho tiempo.