Posted by UnknownEnforcer 5 years ago Report

I wouldn't mind getting shrunk by Cynthia or even Lillie from Sun and Moon

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Posted by Grimmahr 5 years ago Report

It's definitely in the realm of possibilities. You'll probably see everyone at some point given how brief I plan on making each segment.

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Posted by 75ChaosFlare 5 years ago Report

This is very interesting read, Can't wait to see what happens next :)

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Posted by Grimmahr 5 years ago Report

I can't wait to provide it. ^,^

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Posted by TechniMIND 5 years ago Report

I don't usually look forward for Pokemon stories.

But this. This is very interesting for me lol

I like where this is going!

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Posted by Grimmahr 5 years ago Report

^,^

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Posted by NRawk 5 years ago Report

Okay, so I just left this exact review on this series over on Giantess World, but seeing as you respond more on here (and that GW doesn't actually notify authors when their stories get new reviews) I decided to copy paste it over here:

Despite very 'Pro-woman Anti-male' NWO settings are generally not my thing, I do like some of the implications of this world you've created. Though with the Whitney chapter you have set a precedence for anyone to just say they beat someone and shrink them regardless of a battle, so I don't know why any of the girls bother with a battle, or if they ever lose what would stop them from shrinking their opponent before they had to pay up? Not saying that they ever likely could, but if a male trainer does win a match, could he still be shrunk regardless? And with the law side with the winners (or women in this case) to the point that someone like Misty can publicly murder double digit trainers a day, why would men not just go into hiding? Sorry if I sound too negative towards your setting, but I know if I were in this world and not one of the first people shrunk and likely killed, I'd either leave and go off the grid (which would probably be safer) or join/form an underground resistance to disable this tech (which would be easy if you get the right Pokémon).



Still, the Iris chapter is probably my favorite so far and only because she seemed like even if you lost to her, if it was a good match she'd let you live or at least live an easier life than the ones that disappoint her.



For potential future chapters, while Hex Maniac girls, Olivia, Pheobe and Wicke are my favorite Pokégirls, given the setting I'd actually like to see your take on how Liza and Tate (the psychic twins from gen 3) are getting along with these new laws. Specifically, the two share emotional and physical sensations like pain and pleasure, so Liza would most likely want to keep her brother safe since they can't turn off their psychic link, but would it be sisterly love that motivates her or pragmatism? Would she lament not being able to keep him shrunk and close at hand because of fear he'd feel just from being so small, and if someone did try to do something to him how would she react? I feel in this world, these two would have a truly unique perceptive on how both sides of society feel about the change sine in turn, Tate would feel the joy and pleasure Liza feels when she shrinks and interacts with defeated Trainers. Maybe he'd even start to get addicted to the feeling and help lure in unsuspecting Trainers for Liza to then beat...



Actually, if you don't want to run with this idea and it's okay with you, could I take a crack at it? This story sounds way too fun to not write! ^.^

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Posted by Grimmahr 5 years ago Report

I replied on there as well. You can set up notifications under the settings. :P

Thank's for the review on both sites. The one on GTS world is a little more in depth though. xD

PM me here if you want to keep in touch.

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