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Sometimes your pervy cravings become just too strong to resist, so you offer your best friend a bet, which is a win either way, and ask him to stuff you in his lovely scaly tummy, even if he is three times smaller than you. Let’s see what little yet voracious snake can do to fulfill his kinky friend’s desires…
Thanks to Calza aka pirakahunter788 for the awesome rp this story was based on!
https://www.furaffinity.net/user/pirakahunter788
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Posted by Philosoraptor 4 years ago Report
Well written, fun little story. I would have thought the snake would be considered more of a Lamia or Naga since he had arms, but not the stupid kind with a human head. The digestion was more realistic than a lot of stories in that it took close to a week to fully process such a large prey item. I was kind of surprised that he simply shat his former friend into a trash bin, instead of under some bushes in a park or nearby forest which would have seemed more respectful. It was still more realistic than flushing that much waste down a toilet though. You would have thought they may have discussed what to do with all of the Sergal's stuff, or if he had any messages once they knew it was going to end up being a "one way trip" for him. In a world with fatal vore, you might think there would be some legal ramifications to prove this wasn't murder, even something so simple as a standard 'consent form' that you sign if you wish to be eaten by somebody so the predator doesn't get into any trouble. Thanks for sharing!
Posted by RedNastyFox 4 years ago Report
Thank you for your comment, buddy! I am really glad that you still enjoyed my story even if there were some questionable moments in it! It is an ex-RP, so it wasn't built from the ground up and lacks some depth, yet there is much more passion in it than I could ever write by myself.
Posted by TETRO 4 years ago Report
Wow...
That was pretty gay...
Nice work!
My favorite part was imagining the sexy body of the anthro snake boy. For some reason, the image of his physique came together perfectly in my head as I read the story. Although I love a good naga/lamia, there's something kind of sexy about an anthro snake. Male or female, they're so slim, yet curvy, and great candidates for predators.
The main area of improvement would be reworking the structure of how the text flows. I didn't realize I was reading an RP log until I was several paragraphs in. It confused me a bit. Next time, I'd suggest either re-editing it to flow like a regular story, or clearly marking which role player is currently speaking. My preferred method for that is alternating black and blue text, with the first two paragraphs labeled with the names of their respective authors.
But hey, over all, I loved the tone of the whole thing. It was just so... so sexy...
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=hp3ErYD9Rx0
Posted by RedNastyFox 4 years ago Report
Thank you for your comment, pal! I really love anthro snakes myself (it isn’t surprising since 2nd Venus was one of those whose stuff introduced me into vore 7 years ago) and wish there were much more vorish stuff with them! As for poor text quality - I agree with you and I was thinking that probably it would be better to just leave rp logs without any editing since rewriting them as stories sometimes takes more time than writing a new story from a scratch, so probably solution with different text colour would work yet Furaffinity doesn’t show any text format besides regular .txt and you can’t change text color there.
Posted by GilPix 4 years ago Report
Very cute and fun read
Posted by RedNastyFox 4 years ago Report
Hehe, thank you!