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Tags: Belching Clothes Belching up clothing Breast Expansion Digestion Drunk prey F/M fat prey larger prey Lurking Overstuffed smaller pred Spitting clothes spitting up clothing stomach ache Thick prey Thin pred Torn Clothes torn clothing tummy ache Tummyache uncaring prey unconscious Unconscious Prey Weight Gain
Lea is getting a little worried about where her next meal is coming from, but soon finds the windfall of a lifetime will be falling down at her feet.
I thought I should bang out something short and sweet since I'm stuck on a few longer projects, and I've wanted to write a piece about a pred struggling to get from meal to meal. Stream of consciousness writing took things a little off course from the original vision, but I like how it shook out regardless. Hope you enjoy!
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Posted by Cowrie 5 years ago Report
Lovely. Though, I noticed that towards the beginning, you wavered between female and gender-neutral pronouns for Lea. Was that on purpose?
Posted by Peptidase 5 years ago Report
Oops. Thanks for pointing that out. I stared writing it with gender nuetral characters but decided early on to switch over. I fixed a few pronouns but forgot to double check and missed a few. My bad!
Posted by Peptidase 5 years ago Report
Ok, I gave this another scan through and felt it needed quite a few little revisions I remember thinking I was going to remember and forgot on top of a few things I flat out missed, so I decided to bite the bullet and re-upload a revised version. Thanks for bringing that to my attention!
Posted by Cowrie 5 years ago Report
No problem.
Posted by Bright 2 years ago Report
Fun little sequence of devouring.