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Julien has acquired a new fighting game, and Cara wants to use this as an attempt to actually beat Julien at a game for once, but when she makes a joking bet to a tired Julien, she finds a lot more on the table then just "who makes breakfast."
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This was a commission for rjkirentol with a final word count of 4151. I had a lot of fun with this and this is also the debut of my character Julien, a gamer boy who enjoys making bets and eating people he beats~
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Posted by rjkirentol 5 years ago Report
<3 <3 thank you so much kino I absolutely adore this piece ^^. Love your work as always and always happy to commission you~
Posted by CheeseTheCluelessUke 5 years ago Report
Oh God, I loved this so much! It’s right in the perfect spot between an unwilling and willing prey and both a loving yet also dominating pred that it hits all my buttons at once. The characterization of both Julian and Cara was really well done, and the descriptive language was on point. One of the best stories I’ve read in a while, and it makes me wonder how I’m not watching you yet! Seriously, amazing story.
Posted by KinoTheCat 5 years ago Report
Oh wow, this means a lot! Thank you for the wonderful comment, and I'm really glad you liked the story so much!
I won't lie, I love the dubious willing that vore can bring, and its important for me as a writer to try and make the characters feel dynamic. <3 I'm glad that they came across the way they did!
Thank you <3