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here it is! The promised story to go with the pic uploaded last week. And yes. It is only part one. Why? Because I hit about 26 pages which holly molly is a lot. Too much for a casual scroll and read. Also it'll probably be a week until the next part is ready so I figured what not let this out now to tide you guys over.
NOW WARNING!
There is graphic digestion in her. I mean here. You can look at the image and probably guess that but to be sure I'm putting a warning here and in the story. There is also belching, and belching up stuff I won't spoil what but it's not graphic but is kinda gross.
Now for helpful stuff when you see an * look down here:
18 Kilometers – about 11 miles. Pretty far on foot in a post apocalyptic wasteland.
Krivbeknih – In fallout 3 you can recover the literal Necronomicon. And just like in our world it has magical powers that defy our universal understanding and to meddle with it is open the mind to things which can not be known and should no be known.
50 Kilo’s – about 110lbs.
15 meters – about 50ft.
9 meters – about 30ft
Aglets- https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=SLlk0ROvcKA
Blorp gurgle Slosh – “Well that has to deal with how the environment here is far more conducive for settlements than back home. See in this far warmer climate more food can be grown and with more food means more people. It also means that those people tend to eat better. And raiders tend to take more food so they eat better making them bigger and far more fattening. This is not a bad thing. Stop complaining."
A Pip Pocket!* - who would want to live in a mad world where you had computers in your pocket. No one in the fallout verse apparently.
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Posted by Gage73t 5 years ago Report
It's wonderful to see ya writing again!!!!!
I loved this story and am super looking forward to what comes next :D
Posted by tgawsome 5 years ago Report
Glad you enjoyed it! it's been a while since I've really written anything and I was afraid my skills had atrophied, but it seems I still got some of that magic left in these shoes.
I only hope part 2 is as good as part 1.
Posted by lyingunderfire 5 years ago Report
Those eyes, that weather, her demeanor - Chista is a cool cat!
I guess you could say that she had the will-o'-the-wisp running through the forest like that.
Yaaaaaaaaaaaay!
Okay, okay. On a more serious note: All this spawned from one image you commissioned?! Oh, how I wish I had an imagination like yours!
Posted by tgawsome 5 years ago Report
Chista is best cat. Change my mind. Also long post is long.
Ya I went for a more spooky theme this time around. Wanted to try my hand at creating something like, and I think I captured some of that feeling. Could use some work.
Also what can I say? the glowing belly idea was simply too good to pass up. I'll defiantly play with it some more in the future. Perhaps even in the way we discussed.
Ah the serious note. Let me put on my serious hat...
to be honest... ya. Just one picture is all it takes. I also used other stuff from other places like the glowing belly for one. But it did start form this image but in an insane convoluted way.
This 22 page story started as a 2 page story of Chista just taking off her armor and pants then lounging on her belly. But then suddenly a little voice in my mind asked? "Who's in the belly?"
So naturally I added a few pages of her eating some nameless raider. "Why were the raiders there?" So more writing. "Where does all this take place at?" more writing. "Why is Chisa there?" more writing. "whats the raiders name and how did she feel about being eaten?" More writing...
with that more and more things just got tact on. Paragraph after paragraph then comes the editing. Now my mind is being over critical on everything. "you could do this better. expand this scene. Better descriptions. ect..." Which adds more and more stuff to it. Until eventually you get a story pushing 20 pages and I haven't even gotten to the end.
It's funny you mention the main story as this insane creative possess is also the reasons why the main story has been delayed for so long.
My creative attention span is non existent. When I see an image or get a spark of inspiration for an idea all of my creative juices shift to that new thing, leaving the old idea behind.
So the main story that I want to continue just keeps getting sidelined and I really have no idea how to stop it. the best bet would be to maybe get some art about a scene in the next part of the main story for inspiration. As whenever I open fallout 4 to pose it. All those other idea's I've been thinking about just surge to the front.
But for now. I'm going to finish this story first. (cuz I've already gotten this far.) then hope that the main story can capture my creative essence before another idea takes hold.
Posted by The K 5 years ago Report
Great story. I loved the burping cloud bits so much.
Posted by tgawsome 5 years ago Report
Thanks! It's a strange one but an idea I couldn't pass up.
Also sorry for the late reply. I Kinda... burnt myself out pounding out this one so I've been in recovery. But I'm coming back! there will be a part 2!
Posted by xvx17 5 years ago Report
UwU
Posted by tgawsome 5 years ago Report
OwO
Posted by trugabuga 3 years ago Report
Hey, so has this story been dropped then? It's definitely an enjoyable one.
Posted by tgawsome 3 years ago Report
Unfortunately yes.
Life events happened and that mixed with some other stuff killed the drive to write for a while. If you want the whole story check out my blog on this site or Deviant art.
I am returning to writing but I don't think I'll be touching Fallout as a setting for a while.
Posted by trugabuga 3 years ago Report
Well that's certainly unfortunate. But i'm sure whatever you come up with will still be great. I do hope you write more stories about Chista though.
Posted by tgawsome 3 years ago Report
I am doing more stuff with Chista just in a different setting.
Posted by trugabuga 3 years ago Report
Just take your time, i'm sure it'll be a good read :)
Posted by tgawsome 3 years ago Report
Thanks!