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Elina finally finds the dog that's been digging up her garden. She takes care of the problem in a timely manner.
Just finished this up! Man oh man do I love it, I've been itching to write a feral prey story for a little while, and who better to write it with than my girl Elina?
Heads up, probably gonna be writing a few more feral prey stories. I'm on a real feral prey kick. May or may not involve Elina some more.
Posted by DanceMovesFutanariverse 5 years ago Report
Oh yeah this was great! :D
She could end up eating her entire neighborhood all while her family remained non the wiser as to her sudden weight gain.. e.e
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Posted by bluepopsiclez 5 years ago Report
Thanks!
And she definitely could, she certainly has the appetite to do so! She'd love to stick it to all the snobs there via digesting them.
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Posted by anon4321 5 years ago Report
Whoah, human x dog, nice! It’d be awesome to see more of Elina gurgling up ferals into pudge! Excited for what’s in store!
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Posted by DanceMovesFutanariverse 5 years ago Report
Another Anon that's into f/pet?? :D
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Posted by bluepopsiclez 5 years ago Report
Thank you! I'm excited to write more of that, so its good to see others excited for it as well!
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Posted by pendingdelet205h2n9 5 years ago Report
Sauce me up with that feral prey goodnessssss.....
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Posted by Sitharc 5 years ago Report
Always nice to see human pred/animal prey stuff. Shame there isn't much. I need to commission pics of such again.
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Posted by bluepopsiclez 5 years ago Report
I agree! There does need to be more. I'm hoping to write and/or draw more of it soon.
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Posted by Sitharc 5 years ago Report
Especially if the pred is sneaky and actually tries to NOT get caught! Regardless if there's a real reason, a petty one, or none at all!
I can see someone kidnapping/eating the neighbor dog or their friend's dog in response to it biting/scaring her kid brother (he'd be unaware she murders it). Or it's a yappy lil shit and she just wants to give herself a proper night's rest.
Or if she uses a pet shop or shelter... can't just show up even every week/month needing a new animal.
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Posted by bluepopsiclez 5 years ago Report
Yes! Agreed. Preds trying to be sneaky is always good!
And those are some good ideas, would you mind if I perhaps used them in future work? I'll credit you if you'd like.
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Posted by Sitharc 5 years ago Report
Up to you, yet at same time. If she were discovered, need to see more where she gets treated like the monster she was being. Losing friends and/or getting arrested.
Or her having to feign worry and concern after it goes 'missing' whether or not she has to 'help' look for it. Or she sees her friend's distraught posts on a FB like site, whether or not she feels bad. Sometimes she can, but still can't tell a soul. In other cases, even if did... who'd believe her claim she ate an animal/person not only alive, but whole.
I'd think a cat needs a trip down...
Up to you if in any of these she just does it, or if she tries to record it.
I really like it when a pred builds up to eating people by eating animals/objects first, and maybe a kid too before fully going their own size.
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Posted by bluepopsiclez 5 years ago Report
Yes!!
I actually have a story in progress where Elina eats some stray cats who are causing her & her kids trouble (I'm hoping on writing her eating 4 of them, maybe more if I can squeeze them in).
And I also like the idea of preds feigning worry and concern when people notice who/what they ate has disappeared, as well as the building up in size one too. Maybe I could write a story or two about Elina eating smaller things! Like somewhat of a "prequel" to her being the pred she is now.
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Posted by Sitharc 5 years ago Report
Tho I'd have it be one at a time, maybe two. Only more if it's pet fish or small mice.
Had a story made where a girl ate a turtle, then a cat, then an entire melon at different times before she ate her kid brother. They were 'tests' to show her it was impossible, but she kept succeeding... Objects can be used to an extent for that if needbe. Seeing if she can eat something whole that isn't alive to fight back, and see if such a size comes back out.
It'd make sense to go after ones that trust her and/or are quiet in nature.
Accident/unaware can also occur, imagine a pred eating someone by accident, assuming could get out, or were drunk... then freaking out when realizing what's happening! Or even if could free them, her curiosity or whatever gets better of her and she keeps them in far too long.
Failed vore is another thing to see, as gotta take risk and effort to do this stuff, or getting them out and having to get medical attention, whether or not the prey trusts them anymore.
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