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Taking a break from Tales of Forloa. Something i've noticed in the RWBY vore writing scene is a lot of it is either written by the same few artists, or it features Jaune in some capacity.
I decided to help switch things up a little with a fun idea I had on a whim, hopefully this'll help me get into writing more diverse stuff in future too.
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Posted by Apostolos 5 years ago Report
Hmm cute, I picture it ending more in a non fatal manner as the squirming and movement makes Yang heave them back up during the hangover
Posted by CadenGallic 5 years ago Report
I left it open to interpretation, so if you think that, then good on ya.
Posted by Apostolos 5 years ago Report
More of these please? Maybe an anal vore one next?
Posted by CadenGallic 5 years ago Report
Perhaps. This one just came to me as a good idea so any further RWBY fics will be similar principle.
Posted by Apostolos 5 years ago Report
Okay
Posted by The K 5 years ago Report
I loved the burping of Yang and the way you described the bubbles of gas she got while burping.
Posted by CadenGallic 5 years ago Report
Glad you liked it! I've been trying to include more belching in my works.
Posted by FoxtrotAce 5 years ago Report
Good work on this, I haven’t seen anything with twins in a while!
Posted by CadenGallic 5 years ago Report
They're very under utilised, yes. Can never fault those designs though.
Posted by Pseudousia 5 years ago Report
Oh wow! I loved the story! I’ve been looking for this concept in vore stories for ages; where the prey goes into the predator with the intention of pleasuring them into submission/helplessness, and the predator can do nothing about isn’t because the inside of their body is so sensitive!
Posted by CadenGallic 5 years ago Report
Heh yeah, i've always wanted to play around with the natural dom and sub roles in vore, this seemed the best way to do it.
Posted by Boashanpu 3 years ago Report
The phrase "Get in here, I need someone to cuddle" speaks to me on a spiritual level. Absolutely love it.
Posted by Boashanpu 3 years ago Report
The phrase "Get in here, I need someone to cuddle" speaks to me on a spiritual level. Absolutely love it.
Posted by Boashanpu 3 years ago Report
The phrase "Get in here, I need someone to cuddle" speaks to me on a spiritual level. Absolutely love it.
Posted by Boashanpu 3 years ago Report
What the fuck why did it post three times?!
Posted by CadenGallic 3 years ago Report
Not a clue, bud. Glad you liked that line though!