Posted by Xenophage17 5 years ago Report

Awesome, love Denis!!!

Posted by Vir 5 years ago Report

Thanks. ^^

Posted by Flame14 5 years ago Report

Not really a fan of M/F, but I am glad to see the Naruto girls make a return in your work. Honestly when I first saw the title and your description mentioning Boruto, I had kind of hoped we’d be seeing another wonderful work of Hinata stuffing herself with live meals. It was your Naruto works, specifically the predatory Hinata ones, that led me to you, so seeing more of those are always a treat for me and why I was kind of hopeful.

Truthfully, the girls seemed a bit to gullible just getting in someone’s belly like that. If they were still genin or new chunin, then I could maybe understand, but not when their old enough to be mothers. Still, glad to see more work from you, though I’ll continue to be looking out for your now rarer Female Predator or evening monster/female stories.

Posted by Douberi 5 years ago Report

Wow, I really enjoyed this story! Full disclosure I start gushing, but I've not read many of your stories (Well, I've read a few, but compared to how many you've made in general, not too much!) up until this point, just the majority of your Naruto stories as I'm a big fan of the franchise and I loved your use of the characters. But I have to say after reading this I think I just blatantly love Denis! F/F and M/F being my preferences, he's most certainly to my taste, and when it comes to male preds I'm a total sucker for the cute boy types, especially the ones with this cuties general personality!

All that being said, reading about how he was literally so cute that he had three gorgeous women (Ignore the bias for them being Naruto girls and I'll give you a hug! XD) play into his hands, and by extension his gut, was such an utter treat! And well I myself am mostly into forced (AKA Your typical unwilling scenario) or unaware scenarios, I'm also finding that I'm a total sucker for deceit based/tricked prey based scenarios as well in this past couple of weeks!

I should probably cut it off here since I'm just going on and on, but one thing that really caught my eye that I just loved was your subtle use of text, and how at parts it would get progressively "Darker" (Well, not so much darker to say as it hinted at deceitful/unwilling tones.), like your use of the word "incarceration" for instance, over any other words that would have meant the same thing. But yeah, I should stop! All in all, loved your story though hun! If possible I'd love to hear what your inspiration was for this story!

Posted by Vir 5 years ago Report

Thank you, I'm glad you enjoyed it~ ^^

Posted by Deathskull9691 1 year ago Report

Bitte Bitte eine Fortsetzung . Wäre echt mega

Posted by Deathskull9691 1 year ago Report

Bitte eine Fortsetzung