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Tags: Belly Burp Butt Expansion Casual vore Digestion Disposal F/F Fart Farting Gas Gassy Implied reformation M/F m/f/f M/ff Pooping Post Vore Scat Post-Vore Reformation Same Size Scat smaller pred Stomach Noises Struggling Student student pred student prey Student/Teacher Stuffed belly teacher teacher pred teacher prey Underage Underage pred Underage prey Unwilling Prey Voreception Weight Gain
Ok, so, after being horribly busy for a while, and dealing with writer's block, I finally got to writing again. This time, I wrote up a little origin story of sorts for Martin, my first OC. I figured this was an appropriate situation because I've been struggling with it lately and, let's face it, most of us hate math.
Feel free to comment and let me know what you think!
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Posted by TheRPKing 5 years ago Report
Nice story
Posted by Hoboman 5 years ago Report
Thanks.
Posted by Xenophage17 5 years ago Report
Love it, especially the detail of build up to the first time with the fish and focus on the result and disposal as well as the world building about attitude towards vore in the society.
Posted by Hoboman 5 years ago Report
Glad to hear it! I do enjoy a bit of worldbuilding, and to explain why society would have such a casual reaction to vore.
Posted by FuzzyTaco 5 years ago Report
My only gripe is you need to separate dialogue per person into different paragraphs. Otherwise, this was pretty good!
Posted by Hoboman 5 years ago Report
Ok, duly noted, and thanks!
Posted by LordDantai 5 years ago Report
Great story, was a fun and easy read. Keep up the good work
Posted by Hoboman 5 years ago Report
Thanks! I certainly will.
Posted by Bright 5 years ago Report
Quite the enjoyable story.
Posted by Hoboman 5 years ago Report
Thank you!
Posted by IncognitoMistery 5 years ago Report
Lisa still alive?
I am confused for the end
Posted by Hoboman 5 years ago Report
Yeah, she is. For context, she was digested and shit out along with Sterman, and reformed as well.
Posted by blackgoblin668 5 years ago Report
I really like this. There’s one thing that confused me though. Ms. Sterman lost her shoes and then you said her stocking clad feet were then engulfed by Martin. Moments later you said he burped up her heels and panties. So I knot sure if I’m misreading or if that was just an oversight.
Otherwise well done. I can’t wait for more.
Posted by Hoboman 5 years ago Report
Thanks! Yeah, that was a writing goof on my part. Thanks for pointing it out, and I'll definitely be doing more.