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Kyana was relaxing after a hefty meal of around 8 people. Interrupting her rest, a portal opened, allowing a ton of people through, but also plunging Kyana somewhere she might not be familiar with...
A sequel to the story Separative Gluttony.
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Posted by minasan 5 years ago Report
I found this one not as good as the previous story with Kyana.
In Kyana's previous story we saw that her first stomach is basically just storage and people only get digested when you're pulled into later chambers. So she hadn't even gotten around to digesting Elena and Alissa, it's not that they were digestion proof.
I'm also not sure why she'd be willing to have them hang out in her stomach when she didn't like their cum in there to the point of throwing it up. Especially when they're going to be stealing her prey to convert into more cum.
Posted by yEeTbOi 5 years ago Report
Honestly I didn't even really think about that, so you've got me there. I do agree with you, this definitely could have been better. Thanks a lot for your feedback. I wouldn't have really thought much of that if you hadn't said anything. I'm probably not going to change this story, but thanks for letting me know anyways .w.