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After Marcie Russ wakes up the next morning, she wants to experience vore with Elora from Spyro 2. But to her surprise, Elora is not able to be eaten by her unless she can eat up to 2 other characters. So, Marcie decides to eat Zoe the Fairy from the same franchise as well as all the main princesses and the main character of the underrated game Little King's Story.

Like what you see? If you do, be sure to leave suggestions of other characters that Marcie can eat.

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Jumbochamploon: I like constructive Criticism, suggestions on how to improve, and anything positive.
I won't accept rambling criticism, anything relating to what your personal life is like afterwards (for example, anything sexual that you want to say such as 'this made me c*$' or something along those lines of crude). But I can tolerate people saying something is sexy so long as they don't go to lewd territory.

No spamming me negative comments because you don't like me. If you have a real issue with me and what I make, just don't pay attention to me. Trust me, I already have had enough people try to force me to do things with my works.

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Dragonknight007

Posted by Dragonknight007 4 years ago Report

Question when she logs out of multivores then goes back into it does she have to start back at 0 for how many prey she eaten and 0 predator that have eaten her or is it like on her permanent record

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Jumbochamploon

Posted by Jumbochamploon 4 years ago Report

It's on her permanent record :)

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Dragonknight007

Posted by Dragonknight007 4 years ago Report

Kind of a broken system for eating preys then since you could eat hundreds of micros in one day to count as youve eaten hundreds of prey

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Jumbochamploon

Posted by Jumbochamploon 4 years ago Report

Well, I was going to add something into the next part. If you eat people when they're shrunk in a mass vore of sorts (that is, if they aren't already tinies like the princesses of Little King's Story) then the one eating them would only have it count as a single point.
But for the princesses in this? In the game they came from, they were all smaller than thumbtacks with the only one having a giant form model being the main character. I don't want to say anything else, since the game is underrated as all hell and needs more people to play it :)

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Dragonknight007

Posted by Dragonknight007 4 years ago Report

Hmmm fair enough an interesting system so far you've covered some good basics with how the game works now if only it was one we could have in real life

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pridmore2

Posted by pridmore2 4 years ago Report

Bayonetta

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Jumbochamploon

Posted by Jumbochamploon 4 years ago Report

Maybe the next time she logs in :)
Thanks for the suggestion ;D

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pridmore2

Posted by pridmore2 4 years ago Report

Ok when's that

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Jumbochamploon

Posted by Jumbochamploon 4 years ago Report

I kinda need to be in the right mood for a story to be made. It may be tomorrow, it may be in a month. My schedule and stress level factors into what and how I write my stories, much like any other artist or writer.

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