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Frozen 2 spoilers be here.
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Before bed, Elsa is visited by Bruni, who gets a little closer with her than usual.
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Word Count: 3,200 approx
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Frozen 2 wasn't very good, but Elsa and Bruni's interactions are the cutest thing I've ever seen in a Disney film. If a short focusing on the two of them is ever released, I'll watch it a hundred times.
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Visual aid for the characters:
Elsa and Bruni:
https://vignette.wikia.nocookie.net/disney/images/b/b3/Frozen_II_-_Elsa_and_Bruni.png/revision/latest?cb=20190923142904
https://vignette.wikia.nocookie.net/disney/images/0/01/Elsa_and_Bruni_Illustration.jpg/revision/latest?cb=20191116133230
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Posted by thicceater 5 years ago Report
Ooooh my! I wanna read this badly but i havent seen Frozen 2! XD
Guess i'll save it for later <3
Posted by lllll1337 5 years ago Report
I'm glad the big "SPOILERS" in the title has been heeded xD
And I'd love to know your thoughts if you ever do get around to reading :3
Posted by The K 5 years ago Report
Loved how you described the bulging cheeks going red and taut before the burp
Posted by lllll1337 5 years ago Report
Cartoony belches are the best :3
Posted by NewRebellion 5 years ago Report
Hmm....are you SURE that she didn't digest him? We don't actually 'see' what's happening inside. Plus the fact that him venting the gas from her belly could be seen as him struggling to escape. Him settling down could simply be both him running out of space to move and thrash around in, as well as running out of air. And finally, this whole thing was seen from Elsa's pov. Meaning that you could even classify this as 'Willing-to-Unwilling Prey' and vice-versa for Elsa.
Well, whatever you choose to do, I know how I'M always going to see this story ending as!
Regardless of all that, excellent work! I hope we can see more stuff from you about Elsa. You really captured her character from the second movie quite well.
Posted by lllll1337 5 years ago Report
That's a fair point - in my mind the story is nonfatal, but the perspective could leave it ambiguous based on how the reader approaches it. That gives me a lot to think about with limiting perspective.
And thanks! I'm not sure if/when I will write more Elsa, but I definitely have other ideas for her.
Posted by JacksonTheEmperor 5 years ago Report
Frozen 2 was AMAZING.
Posted by lllll1337 5 years ago Report
To each their own!
Posted by thorkjohnson 4 years ago Report
There needs to be an animated comic for this.
Posted by Shade18 2 years ago Report
That was better than it needed it be. Thank you. I really have seen to many stories with these characters but I wish to see more!