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Waterslides are not the safest By Filtia -- Report

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Tia spies a water slide in the distance. Who knows what shenanigans will result on them all going down it.

The scenario on the slide was partly inspired by the intro paragraph to MM A Centaur's Recovery Chapter 1 By  Vmaster608. I do not know how to link to a story so this might not work properly.

This one is a bit longer than any of my previous stories. I hope you can enjoy it regardless.

As always any criticism would be much appreciated. So please leave a comment if you like or dislike it.

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TheMysteriousSadSack

Posted by TheMysteriousSadSack 5 years ago Report

I probs missed the part where height is mentioned but fila seems a bit larger than normal here. Still though, ball climbing is good as hell and i cant wait to see what lewd stuff will happen at night

Filtia

Posted by Filtia 5 years ago Report

I think I get what you mean. I did not notice it at all while editing. I need to make a size chart so issues like that don't happen too often from now on. I am glad you are looking forward to the next chapter though, if you do not mind me asking any preference for what you would want to see?

TheMysteriousSadSack

Posted by TheMysteriousSadSack 5 years ago Report

Any of that ball stuff we got here would be nice, some smother or stradling would kill ot. Really though this whole series does it for me so ill take what ever is already planned tbh

Filtia

Posted by Filtia 5 years ago Report

I was planning on doing that anyway. It is quite fun to write it but I am still glad you like it.

Vmaster608

Posted by Vmaster608 5 years ago Report

Just read your story, and I just wanted to say that I loved it. I am happy that my story was able to inspire you. Looking forward to reading more of your stories.

Also, to put a picture/giving credit all you need to do is put my name in like this. Just remove the parentheses and add another colon at the end.

(: iconVmaster608 )

Filtia

Posted by Filtia 5 years ago Report

Thank you for telling me. It was bugging me that I was not able to link to your account and I am honoured that you like my stories.

Vmaster608

Posted by Vmaster608 5 years ago Report

You are quite welcome, and I cannot wait to see some more. If you ever want to talk about story ideas just let me know.

Filtia

Posted by Filtia 5 years ago Report

I gladly will. Thank you again.