Posted by Bags 5 years ago Report

Cute! Hope to see an external of the shower <3

Posted by ChaoskampfNunc 5 years ago Report

It's so good you'll feel like you're melting~

Posted by whatisthissheet 5 years ago Report

The expressiveness of the pose and face is just amazing. I really love how the leg shows serious digestion without being too graphic.

Posted by Hozomat 5 years ago Report

Oh dear, I love it! You really hit the spot on so many points! The acid drooling, the stomach walls... And even the prey is adorable!
I might just nag you about a few details though.
Unless her leg has already melted, it shouldn't be knee-deep on such a small quantity of acid. The acid is a tad too bright I think, but it fits well with your colorful style! Also, since the stomach is larger than the mouth, the prey should not be that big. But I gotta say, it's actually my favorite size you've drawn here :3
Overall, I am really hyped for the sequel! :D

Posted by Mouhr 5 years ago Report

I'm glad you like it! And thank you so much for the constructive criticism!!

Posted by Hozomat 5 years ago Report

You're welcome! And if I could add something:
I think you can add a few details to enhance the feeling that the prey is inside a giant woman. Here, it kinda looks like it's cut away and simply put on a black wall, instead of being inside a body.
You can either draw the giantess' silhouette around (framing her waistline for instance), or add organs around (this may not be everyone's favorite though). The esophagus is already a nice touch to complete the anatomy. A simple trick would also be to smoothen the transition between the stomach pink and the black.

And I think that's all I can say so far. rotaelfuu is giving quite the advice on the stomach itself below. So you've got quite a complete criticism now! :)

Posted by Mouhr 5 years ago Report

I think you're right that adding something around the actual stomach, whatever it may be, would probably add to the drawing quite a bit. Even make it seem a bit more, complete? I did want to keep it simple for this first attempt but I'm for sure going to keep your propositions in mind for the next time that I try this kind of thing!

Posted by Cuddlekins 5 years ago Report

I do like the distress on her face, since I see so many facial reactions to being eaten more along the lines of like... mild annoyance than actual terror. Interesting take on the stomach lining, too, though I wonder if the wrinkles could be a bit denser to make it seem more filled out o:

Posted by Suibelly 5 years ago Report

Very nicely done. The burn marks from the acid are a cool touch.

Posted by RoTheHuman 5 years ago Report

This is a great internal shot, first attempt or otherwise! I really like it, particularly with the reaction of the girl inside of it. Since you asked and since I spent a lot of time looking at internal shots and thinking about how to do them, maybe I can give some constructive criticism...

Perhaps make the stomach walls appear more wet? They're generally very wet and slimy. More / brighter highlights would help them read that way. A bit more dripping acids / mucus / saliva / whatever fluids you want to include would also do that.

More wrinkles in the stomach walls could improve things. They look a bit like veins right now at least in terms of their shape, but you want them to look like muscle slightly folding over itself. I often look at references of actual stomachs to try and help with that.

And this last one is really more my opinion, but I think stomach acids look better when they're more yellow-ish than green, and a little more desaturated, especially since the light inside the stomach (granted it's unrealistic that there would be any) would be more red tinted. But that's just me. Some people prefer green stomach acids, and if that's the case for you then that's fine of course! Green acids do have the advantage of being easier to distinguish from a character's skin tone than than yellow acids too.

Wow, I had more to say than I thought I would. I hope that was helpful!

Posted by Mouhr 5 years ago Report

Thank you, I really appreciate the feedback. It's quite helpful to get advice from people who most probably have more experience with these topics!

Posted by Moonlightshadow 5 years ago Report

Oooooh, I really like this o/
Chocolate bar sized preys and larger are my favorite for macro/micro scenarios :u
For criticism... let's see...
Remember that stomach is not made of solid walls but it's a fleshy bag made from stretchable muscles surrounded by a similarly squishy surroundings. Especially at this size, in spots where she is leaning into them and with her left leg in the stomach acids, she should be somewhat 'sinking' into the walls and making bumps on it from 'outside'(At least organ wise. She would still need to be actually kicking or pushing on them to make a struggle bump visible on belly itself). Think something like a water bed or trampoline for stomach walls.

Posted by Mouhr 5 years ago Report

That's a good way to keep the behaviour of the walls in mind, which is something I might have overlooked a bit when making this. Thanks!

Posted by SherlokKirya 4 years ago Report

That is a great comment

Posted by SherlokKirya 5 years ago Report

Stomach itself looks great ! But I think you could draw stomach acids more interesting and realistic

Posted by SherlokKirya 4 years ago Report

Also, I love how you showed that her legs are burning, great detail

Posted by Mouhr 4 years ago Report

Thank you! I'm glad you noticed it!