That was SO hot. I just loved the femdom aspect of this story. And Lillith makes an AMAZING pred. For me, nothing beats a truly selfish and sadistic woman as a predator. Forcing a victim to oil and season himself is just... next level.
Thank you very much for the kind words! I had a lot of fun writing this pred. It was a foray outside the universe I'm establishing. I did it as a bit of experiment to see if folks enjoyed it. I may have to make her a permanent part of the writing rotation. ;)
Posted by Bright 5 years ago Report
I really like the way you build up the story.
I also enjoy the way you write dialogue.
Posted by Ryujin 5 years ago Report
Just saw this Bright! Thanks! That means a lot. I really appreciate you taking the time to let me know. :)
Posted by knt27 5 years ago Report
That was SO hot. I just loved the femdom aspect of this story. And Lillith makes an AMAZING pred. For me, nothing beats a truly selfish and sadistic woman as a predator. Forcing a victim to oil and season himself is just... next level.
Posted by Ryujin 5 years ago Report
Thank you very much for the kind words! I had a lot of fun writing this pred. It was a foray outside the universe I'm establishing. I did it as a bit of experiment to see if folks enjoyed it. I may have to make her a permanent part of the writing rotation. ;)