The long awaited final chapter to the beach arc. I really was lazy with this one. I need to pick up the pace when writing I realise.

I also changed the way the story is told from first to third person.I feel it is slightly better than the ones before. I hope that doesn't stop you from enjoying it.

I forgot before to add  Vmaster608 for his contribution. He helped me fix up the plot and did proofreading. Thanks a lot.

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