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On Iku's drunken day off, Tenshi learns the hard way that even the patient have their limits...
Story for the new year, wow I actually finished something. Hope someone enjoys it, please comment, comments fuel my ego and let me know people read this stuff.
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Posted by DimentedChaos 5 years ago Report
its been three thousand years
Just kidding, wonderful stuff, and it's great to see something from you again! I've always really liked your style and how casual you write preds. Plus it all just flows really well and is easy to read. The additional soul digestion and how quickly Iku tosses aside Tenshi's dress and forgets about her is just, oof, ten outta ten. No real complaints honestly. Maybe some minor nitpicks? But honestly they're not significant enough to matter that much. Keep it up dude.
Posted by nyttyn 5 years ago Report
Thank you very much for your kind words! I hope you keep it up as well, your works are a treat to read as well.
hopefully not 3k years until my next story
Posted by Ouroboros 95 5 years ago Report
A comment to let you know I read the story.
But seriously, welcome back! I know virtually nothing of touhou but your stories are always really good. In such a short amount of time, you established Tenshi to be perfectly bratty and letting Iku be justified in this. I also love the unintentional soul digestion. It’s something I don’t see in a ton of stories.
All in all, great story. Hope to be around for your next one.
Posted by nyttyn 5 years ago Report
Thank you! Yeah, Tenshi's a total brat. Glad I was able to convey an enjoyable experience even to someone who doesn't know much about touhou.
Posted by Circle0Trick 5 years ago Report
Love the legendary fish. Guess Iku’s stomach is stronger than a shinigami, too.
Love Tenshi’s self centered attitude incapable of finding fault in herself. So true to character. Well, I guess that’s most TH characters, but still, Tenshi takes it the farthest without fatal results, and you captured it in a fun way.
Thanks for writing and posting.
Posted by Circle0Trick 5 years ago Report
That tag is making me crave Iku ass now tho ♥