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This was a commission for moomishii, originally finished 16 January 2020. Thumbnail image drawn by me. View it here: https://aryion.com/g4/view/575995
The assassin, Shuten-Douji, decides that she's had enough of the Berserker Minamoto no Raikou, and takes matters into her own hands to get rid of her.
This was a fun piece to write for a fandom I wasn't familiar with before. I hope I captured the characters well enough! Enjoy!
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Posted by noisekeeper 4 years ago Report
Very awesome Shuten story! I'd say you got the characters down pretty well, along with their bitter dislike of one another. And the added post digestion sentience was also a nice touch!
Posted by Azoon 4 years ago Report
Great story. Only issue I found was very minor, and it’s more of an opinion than anything, which is Raikou’s usage of profanity. It seems a bit out of character and threw me off a little but it didn’t detract from anything.
Posted by boomerangfish 4 years ago Report
Pretty good!
Posted by Bright 4 years ago Report
A very enjoyable story.