It certainly came out very nice! However I did notice that there were some stray orange lines I can see, along with the ending frames not fading out all the way.
The facial expressions were on point for the most part. You could however add that of blinking since I don't see Hitsuji (the predator obv) doing such. Another thing I'd reccomend adding in is the prey getting stuck in that cock for a second or two, before getting transferred towards the balls, much like what you did during the second rendition of the Jellyfish sister request.
There also could have been more throbbing throughout the animation of the cock but of course, I can understand that may take a bit to do. Another thing i'd also would reccomend is general body movement, such as breathing aka in and out motions around the stomach region. :o But it's up to you.
Another recc i'd give is probably perhaps after the disposal, and all the cum is gone, they can be seen panting at the end with that smug expression which could end off them suddenly looking at the viewer like a 'you're next' sort of look.
Aside from that, you've done outstanding with this animation and I am very impressed!
Posted by 4lphaBravo 5 years ago Report
It certainly came out very nice! However I did notice that there were some stray orange lines I can see, along with the ending frames not fading out all the way.
The facial expressions were on point for the most part. You could however add that of blinking since I don't see Hitsuji (the predator obv) doing such. Another thing I'd reccomend adding in is the prey getting stuck in that cock for a second or two, before getting transferred towards the balls, much like what you did during the second rendition of the Jellyfish sister request.
There also could have been more throbbing throughout the animation of the cock but of course, I can understand that may take a bit to do. Another thing i'd also would reccomend is general body movement, such as breathing aka in and out motions around the stomach region. :o But it's up to you.
Another recc i'd give is probably perhaps after the disposal, and all the cum is gone, they can be seen panting at the end with that smug expression which could end off them suddenly looking at the viewer like a 'you're next' sort of look.
Aside from that, you've done outstanding with this animation and I am very impressed!